FoxyBooks

London

Wattpad Writer, Art Director

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The idea is interesting, but there's always room for more improvement.. The grammatical errors and writing style need some work, otherwise, you have potential. Keep it up!

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I'm impressed

I only read the first part and honestly? I'm impressed. For an eleven year old, this is some good work, aside from a few grammatical errors, it has some very good imagination. Also, give some time to your descriptions, otherwise, it's interesting. You've got potential kid, keep it up!

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Total page turner

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Grammars need some work, otherwise the idea is pretty interesting.

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An extraordinary style of writing, looking forward to read more!

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The Young Foreigner

Enthralling! Although a the writing style could be improved, intriguing nonetheless. Reading it, certainly won't be a regret. ❤

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This is great work. Has me totally hooked!

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A little grammatical errors, and the characters need a little more work, but otherwise, the story us off to a great start.

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