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Cupid's Heart

I suggest you separate the dialogue and paragraphs.And the story is too forward, you don't need to rush things.Also you need to add more descriptions for example you never told us what the company looked like.The story is quite impressive though keep up the good work.

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Amazing

The book is very interesting and well written the plot really got me at the edge of my seat.I look forward to reading the next chapter!

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Spectacular

I haven't finished the book but the plot and all is really amazing.This is the kind of book i have been looking for all my life.

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