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Narnia

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I am a writer of poetry myself so it warms my heart to see that you also are creating poems as well.

However, don't obsess over the SAME exact style of poetry you can bore your readers. I do enjoy the ones where you let the readers asses their feelings, aside from that make some poems that are concrete. Which means don't make every poem a 'guess your feelings' game because then it gets confusing.

For your list poem make sure that the first three words are the same the whole way through otherwise the whole ordeal is lost and it doesn't make it a list poem any longer.

Grammar. The first poem you wrote is good, but very confusing. I understand your concept but it's extremely hard to follow and understand.

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