GarethN

The waterways of England.

In 2018, I gave up work to write full time and I now live on a narrowboat. I write two in two genres: the ‘Wild Rose’ series of lightly erotic romances; and post apocalyptic books.

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Brett!

Interesting opening chapter but needs a bit of polishing :
You always need a punctuation mark inside the closing quotation mark of quoted speech.:

“Hello,” she said.

“Goodbye.” She walked out of the room.
The words ‘I’ is always capitalised.
I don’t find some of your dialogue convincing. Either read it out loud or get an app to read your stuff back to you.
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Here today, gone tomorrow

An amusing little yarn, well written with a light, slightly cynical eye.. More of a short story than a novel for there is no significant plot or character development.
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Yorkshire Walker

A fascinating and original plot. In places I got slightly lost with the changes in points of view and the flashbacks and there were occasional irritating technical errors but overall I thoroughly enjoyed the book.
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