Gerald Anders

Avid fantasy and science fiction author

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Interesting premise

I really enjoyed the flow of the story. Often new authors have trouble with that, but I don't see any issue here. The setting is relatable, and the plot is easy to follow. I am looking forward to reading more from this series.

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Star Trek meets Jurassic Park

Really enjoying the story! Definitely identify with the main character, the story is easy to follow along, and I didn't spot any noticeable errors. I would buy this book if it was on the shelf at a bookstore.

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Fascinating Concept

I was never a large fan of DnD growing up, but I did fall in love with the overall concept. Most of the writing I've seen focuses more on the story and hardly anything on the players behind the scenes, not to mention the dice rolls.

Overall, it is clearly written with a fun plot, a traditional fantasy setting and definitely worth recommending.

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Intricate

I really enjoy characters that realize that they are more than what they realize. Especially when there are twists and turns. Keep up the good work!

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