A good read!!
Ok. I'm probably gonna phrase this review weird, if it is, my apologies.
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First. I do like the world in which the story is set in. The strange powers that be, the demons pretty much trapped, the secret societies and such. It's a good world that we get ideas about mainly through the dialogue.
Second, the characters at the beginning felt somewhat emotionless, but that fixed itself throughout the story and I could tell the characters were emoting at the end. Such as Aryan crying over Dimisha's body. You could feel the emotion in that area.
Third: here will be something I think could be worked on for the next story. I will try not to touch on things other reviewers have so you're not just getting the same thing over and over again. One of the biggest things that I think could be worked on is the fact that this, in some places, read like a script for a play, not a story. This could be fixed by adding in more detail and more character action. For instance "Dimisha noticed the earrings hanging from the receptionist's ears, and made a mental note of it. Anything could become useful in her quest and as such, she would need to make note of it." or, "Aryan cradled Dimisha in his arms, his body trembling. She couldn't be gone. She just couldn't be! He ran his hands through his hair, trying to get any kind of reaction from her. He didn't even realize his tears were falling to her cheek. "Dimisha speak to me, please. P-please, speak to me..." His body shook with his sobs as he held her body close to his own".
Stuff like that I think could have helped. As said, it was in some places in it, so not every signal chapter was like that.
Four: to end it, I will reiterate what I said in the first point. I love the world. It made for an interesting story. I can't wait to see what other stories you will come up with!