GMB1961, (gLeNn)

Mornington Peninsula

Hello and Welcome to my collection of stories. Thank you to everyone who adds my stories to their reading list. You are so kind. Faithfully GMB1961

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Starla Star

I stayed up most of the night reading it was very touching kind of bitter sweet yet so sad even though happy too . You write drawing interest as to not be able to put it down until read smiles so good on drawing the reader into the story . I am not a grammer police but in the begining there were some places that i had to mentally add a word or two in like the or something sorry cant recall but all in all very good and I am proud of you smiles .. love you my friend and love how you write and such, keep on being you as you shine !
( I am posting this for my friend in the USA who is having trouble with her computer, she told me what to put in here and I am helping her out, Faithfully Glenn Brace , Author)

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Well Done, I enjoyed your story

I really enjoyed this story Mariam, well done. Please don't stop writing you have a real talent there.
I really hope you become very popular. All the very best to you. Faithfully GMB1961

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GREAT READ

Had some time between things here and read your story. Well done.

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Really Enjoyed This .....

Great story friend, I enjoyed reading it and was amazed at the detail and descriptive way you wove it all together. It was very believable. I would say it needs to be read and I highly recommend it!!!
Faithfully GMB1961.

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Loved writing and reading it again and again.

Just so you know why I wrote both of the Barnatum Kragtank short stories. Ive been married twice once for 23 years and another time for 18 months , i dated one lady for 2 months short of 6 years and each time I did these things i got my heart ripped out and danced on in a big way. So after talking with my dad and finally having his advice "sink in" I put most of what I was feeling into words in these two stories especially the "LOVE" one. If you have had your heart ripped out and trashed like me then these books are just for you. I loved doing it because it stopped the abject sadness from over whelming me and making me do something stupid. So there .....I've reviewed my own book and i enjoy reading it over and over. You will to.
GMB1961

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Starla Star

read the whole book wow great story good writing good plotting good flow of converations and thought process and a wonderful imagination smiles

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