Grace Harding

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B R I L L I A N T

I am thoroughly enjoying this story so far, from the characters to the plot! I really REALLY like the fact that you also decided to write the story in the villan's POV as we are able to see the other side to the story and understand the pain Nova has gone through and therefore we (the readers) are able to cheer her on and understand her pain and suffering she went through.

The foundation for your plot seems to be very strong, the only downside is that I feel it's slightly cliché with the whole fire and ice idea, but to be fair, it works best for this type of story. You wouldn't have earth and fire because that literally makes no sense lol, so I really do think that even though it is a bit cliché, it is very promising!

I also just what to say that I am slightly worried by the speed the story is moving at, I don't know if you'll hit a writer's block, unsure if what to write, but you know what's best - after all, you are the author to this wonderful story!

Apart form that, there is one last thing I want to point out, I would really love some more description of the characters. We learn a lot about what Nova looks like, but hardly anything about Alexander or his girlfriend. It would be brilliant to have that description because otherwise the characters are just a blob in my brain and I can't tell what they look like etc. I hope this makes sense!

Finally, I just want to say that I really love your style of writing! There were times when I felt shocked by Nova and her antics, and other times when I felt like an emotional baby, before finally cracking up at small sections throughout. I really do think you'll be able to go far with a bit of editing etc - but save that until AFTER you have finished writing so you don't ruin your creative streak.

Oh and by the way, just in case you didn't gather, I FRIDGING LOVE YOUR COVER 😍😍😍

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amazing!

I read this story over on wattpad quite a while ago, but I can remember clearly falling in love with the characters and the whole plot. It is a beautiful story and I really recommend reading it! The writing is also absolutely amazing!

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BRILLIANT


I read this book from start to finish and within chapter one, fell in love with EVERYTHING about this story! I REALLY recommend reading this if you love romance stories with in-depth plot and character development!

The characters are funny, whitty and relatable along with loveable (especially lil' Isaac and William and pretty much everyone else lmao) and they also have their flaws which is always important when writing a novel. Props to you author!

An issue I had was the amount of grammatical mistakes that can be found later on in the book, however, with a bit of editing, it will be fine. Also, images of texted between the characters are needed for you to read this story (therefore I suggest to read it on wattpad), but I read it without and whilst it did confuse me, I was fine so I don't think it's that detrimental.

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I would have loved to have seen something develop more between the MC and her ex boyfriend. I almost feel (no offence) that it was thrown in without proper development. I didn't even realise he abused her until near the end of the novel when we meet him. Whether I can't remember it or it wasn't there, it would be Greta to have hints to really intrigue the reader and make them wonder about her past. It just wasn't too obvious to me unfortunately.

Finally, at the end of the story, there is a girl who gives her umbrella to the MC and we are introduced to her and when you talk about how Gemma gets a bad feeling, you leave it unanswered therefore making the ending somewhat unsatisfactory. I would have loved to see more about that girl or just scrap her completely if it was just a filler to keep up the word count. You can't leave unanswered scenes and scenarios like that!! Trust me, it annoyed me lol.

But apart from that, the plot and everything else is magnificent, I'm so glad I picked up this book and have it a chance because I was very happy by the end!

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It's off to a good start!

I enjoyed reading the couple of chapters you have written so far and although I haven't been able to discover loads about the story so far, I really do think it is off to a good start!

However, I think there are a few things I think you can improve on: a better cover, because whilst the one you have got now stands out well, I think it would do better with maybe having a couple on the front or something that is a bit more interesting or intricate, however, that is totally your call. I recommend (as a writer who has been writing for seven years) making a mood board of all the covers you get inspiration from, whether it be on Google or Pinterest, and then you are able to make the perfect cover.

Another thing is that I've noticed a couple of spelling mistakes including "fly's" instead of "flies", but everyone makes mistakes! You say you use grammarly, however, as a somewhat experienced writer, I feel that you should reread your chapters thoroughly, but ultimately, mistakes will be made which is fine! That's why beta readers are so good!

One more thing is that in the second chapter, there was a section of dialogue which was rather confusing to read between the boy and the girl as it was all in one paragraph. When writing, it is always better to seperate the speech and dialogue so it is a lot easier to read.

One final note is that I would love to have a lot more description of the characters and the setting, which will also help to lengthen your chapters and help the reader to be put in the scene because I'm struggling to picture it and the characters. I hope this makes sense.

Over all though, I think you have good potential

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Love itttttt

I started reading this a while ago and am about half way through and can I just say, I am LOVING this story! The plot, the characters and writers craft are all so brilliant and I immediately got dragged in after reading the first line of this fantastic novel! My only worry is that it seems to have a couple of clichés (don't want to say what so I don't spoil it!) But in all honesty, most romance and young adult novels seem to have some element of cliché so it isn't a big deal! In all honesty, I think it makes the story more fun and cute!

I definitely recommend it to anyone who lives romance with a splash of cliché align with a whole bucket of originality!

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It's off to a promising start!

Okay, I recently picked up this book because I though, why not? The cover is cool and it sounds interesting, and I was right! The description of the story is very good and I am excited to read future updates that the author has in store!

What really stood out to me was how unusual the plot was and the setting! It is really exciting to read and I'm already rooting for Raven (especially after learning how badass she is) and ***** (don't want to spoil it!!) Do I do recommend giving this a try if you're into sci-fi and romance!

However, I was slightly worried that the book was going to have cliché elements, like I'm getting the sense that this has a twist on werewolves and mates, and the guy seems rather protective over her already and I know that the mate bond is supposed to make you really attracted to the other person, but I felt like it was happening to soon? I don't know really since my knowledge is rather limited when it comes to werewolves, but in the second chapter ( I believe) you mention that she gave a lustful gaze at the boy, but I feel like because she is human, she wouldn't be doing things like that because as the boy suggested, she won't understand. Also, the fact that she is so strong and emotionless is another cliché for me, I don't know if that is just me or if others have experienced it, but in my opinion it is. So I just hope that there will be an added twist to it in future and that we will see the girl's weak side and vulnerable side so that not only does she seem human, but also that she is relatable.

Another thing I love about this book is the hunger games and divergent aspect I feel like you are entwining, both books are amazing and I've always wondered what it would be like to combine the two into one story, and I feel like this hits the mark! However, make sure to not make this story too similar as that would basically be copying which is a no no XD.

There were unfortunately quote q few grammatical errors, whether it was mixing up your with you're etc, but some of them were just typos and we've all done that! So don't stress too much, but make sure to fix them when it comes to the editing stage xx

With all this said, I still have high hopes for the author and I'm expecting it to get a little bit saucy since it is 18+ which isn't necessarily my type of thing, but hey ho! Keep up the amazing work!

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My all time favourite!

Ugh, I cannot get enough of this book!!!! It's absolutely perfect! It used to be on wattpad before they were stupid enough to take it down (I still think everyone who was jealous of Holly's magnificent writing took over to take it down) but I'm so so glad it's up on inkitt now!!!! I cannot wait to re read it and relive the memory!!! AHHHH I'm so excited to start reading it!!!! I swear, if none of you fall in love with this book, y'all don't have a heart!!!!

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