It's off to a promising start!
Okay, I recently picked up this book because I though, why not? The cover is cool and it sounds interesting, and I was right! The description of the story is very good and I am excited to read future updates that the author has in store!
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What really stood out to me was how unusual the plot was and the setting! It is really exciting to read and I'm already rooting for Raven (especially after learning how badass she is) and ***** (don't want to spoil it!!) Do I do recommend giving this a try if you're into sci-fi and romance!
However, I was slightly worried that the book was going to have cliché elements, like I'm getting the sense that this has a twist on werewolves and mates, and the guy seems rather protective over her already and I know that the mate bond is supposed to make you really attracted to the other person, but I felt like it was happening to soon? I don't know really since my knowledge is rather limited when it comes to werewolves, but in the second chapter ( I believe) you mention that she gave a lustful gaze at the boy, but I feel like because she is human, she wouldn't be doing things like that because as the boy suggested, she won't understand. Also, the fact that she is so strong and emotionless is another cliché for me, I don't know if that is just me or if others have experienced it, but in my opinion it is. So I just hope that there will be an added twist to it in future and that we will see the girl's weak side and vulnerable side so that not only does she seem human, but also that she is relatable.
Another thing I love about this book is the hunger games and divergent aspect I feel like you are entwining, both books are amazing and I've always wondered what it would be like to combine the two into one story, and I feel like this hits the mark! However, make sure to not make this story too similar as that would basically be copying which is a no no XD.
There were unfortunately quote q few grammatical errors, whether it was mixing up your with you're etc, but some of them were just typos and we've all done that! So don't stress too much, but make sure to fix them when it comes to the editing stage xx
With all this said, I still have high hopes for the author and I'm expecting it to get a little bit saucy since it is 18+ which isn't necessarily my type of thing, but hey ho! Keep up the amazing work!