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Good read

I really enjoyed this. At first i was put off by the third person style. But it quickly grew on me. The plot was well thought out. I was invested in both the antigonast and protagonist. My wife and I routenely discussed they're choices and the characters personality evolution. The sex scenes were organically placed and well written. The writer painted a picture well enough to get me turned on, without it being too much like the story was created around them. I do wish the writer's erotic and and general thesaurus vocabulary was a little larger. All in all its q good read and i would read the rest of them.

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