gremlin.writes

I have always enjoyed reading and writing my own stories; mostly inspired by my love of fantasy and mythology, where the novels can be set in worlds unlike our own.

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Interesting start

I think the paragraphs need to be broken down a bit, and you use a lot of ellipsis where they're not needed. More description into the character's appearance and their surroundings would help the reader picture the story in their head a lot clearer. Aside from that your story has me intrigued to find out what happened to Lola and why she is bent on getting revenge, and to find out Adrian's role in her life.

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Good start

I enjoyed the concept of your story, having a witch and werewolf as mates isn't something you come across everyday. I loved how each character had their own personalities, but I would have liked to have read more in terms of conversation to get a better feel to how they react to one another. You're world building was amazing and I could really feel myself immersing into the land of werewolves, magics and humans, Overall, good job.

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