Hello there Guys! I'm new to Inkitt and wrote my very first Story... even if it's only one Chapter yet. So, it would be very nice, giving me some Advices how to get better at writing story's. What you should expect: -Grammar All in one you have to expect sometimes some grammatical mistakes, as English isn't my first language. -Age Restrictions In the Story, it will be described a lot of Blood, Gore and Violence. You should already know, what's going to happen often. Also, it gives a lot
of Swears. Watch out that no kids will read it! -Story wiseIt mainly takes Part in Future America, in the Year 2070. The Thing is, it won't go Direction Sci-Fi, as in the Year 2040 the Bombs started to fall. You will follow the Main Character Ethan Kustenow through his Story and Future, His Decisions and Regrets. But His Past will of course be explained, But this with Flashbacks, that occurs in-between the Story.But cause Ethan will be very young at the Start of the Flashbacks, his Father will take the part of the Protagonist in it. In the First Chapter the Flashbacks will take Part in Russia, the Year 2040, where Ethan is six years old. Well, if you're interested in reading it, here's the Link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/1068530
I hope soon for Feedback and Criticism, so that I know what I should change in the Future.