Thriller

JMH_Writer

Want to do a review swap? Let me know below!
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/225833

Blurb:
On her sixteenth birthday, Emma received a card through the post. It was from the father who she had always believed died in a car accident, along with her mother, when she was four years old.

Visiting him in prison, she learns of the secrets of her own past, which have been kept from her, by her grandparents, for the last 12 years. Patrick, her father, is serving a ... See More prison sentence for the murder of, Emma's mother, information she had been kept unaware of.

Against her grandparents' wishes, Emma continues to visit Patrick, and builds a relationship with him, on the basis of her trust for his claimed innocence.

Wishing to exonerate Patrick, Emma chases down the truth of what happened to her mother one night twelve years previous, despite numerous warnings against doing so.

Once she discovers the true identity of her mother's murderer, Emma finds herself conflicted between two options; clearing a supposedly innocent man's name, or, keeping the truth, unknown to all but two people, buried, as it always has been. Both choices will have a grueling impact on Emma for the rest of her life.

Mia Suknovic

Hello ladies and gentlemen.
If you tough I would like you to review my story, you are wrong.
I just want people to enjoy my stories.
If you would like to check out White Roses https://www.inkitt.com/stories/action/207021/chapters/1?preview=true you are not obligated to review it and you can just enjoy my imagination I put on Inkitt.

The period of violence and organized crime leads to the creation of intricate relations between Italy and Russia. After Bratva remains ... See More without Pakhan, Karina Mogilevich comes to the throne. Wanting to take the Russian mafia in their hands, Vicencio Ciancimino organizes the kidnapping of Karina Mogilevich. The Spanish Mafia led by Alberto Dorado, who sends his son, Manuel Dorado, to return Karina to the Russian throne as they try to stop Ciancimino from taking the control over Bratva. But can a man control the superior Karina Mogilevich whom her father learned her various games when she was just a child?

And before you say that this is some feminist stuff, it's not. I just wanted to break the cycle of powerful men in the mafia and turn attention to a woman that will be a protagonist in the story.
Enjoy my story and expect updates on every Wednesday.

JMH_Writer

I'm more than willing to do review swaps, just leave me a message in a comment below :)
I'm in need of some reviews on my novel in progress, A Fictitious Attribution. It's a drama with a mystery/thriller plot. Please give it a read.
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/225833

Blurb:
On her sixteenth birthday, Emma received a card through the post. It was from the father who she had always believed died in a car accident, along with her mother, when she was four ... See More years old.

Visiting him in prison, she learns of the secrets of her own past, which have been kept from her, by her grandparents, for the last 12 years. Patrick, her father, is serving a prison sentence for the murder of, Emma's mother, information she had been kept unaware of.

Against her grandparents' wishes, Emma continues to visit Patrick, and builds a relationship with him, on the basis of her trust for his claimed innocence.

Wishing to exonerate Patrick, Emma chases down the truth of what happened to her mother one night twelve years previous, despite numerous warnings against doing so.

Once she discovers the true identity of her mother's murderer, Emma finds herself conflicted between two options; clearing a supposedly innocent man's name, or, keeping the truth, unknown to all but two people, buried, as it always has been. Both choices will have a grueling impact on Emma for the rest of her life.

M.S GASTON

Hi there. I want to hear your comments hehe. Ive updated Chapter 3 of I see everything. Click the link below and leave a comment. Thanks https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/225216/chapters/3?noAutoScroll

Carrie B

Please read my story and give me a review and give it a like and follow me Tiffany has had a hard life dealing with her mother and other issues she meets Ty and although they may see that they don't have anything in common at first it takes one day in court to realize that they aren't so different. This story has everything romance, drama, suspense, and thrills.
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/233186
Heaven Matthews was just a girl who moved to NYC to acquire fame. However what ... See More she didn't know were all the things she was going to have to do to keep the fame and move on to the higher levels of stardom. There were lives lost and blood on her hands. Maybe even love lost. Everything you think of about the music industry may be a huge lie. Read this, vote, follow me
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/232316

JMH_Writer

Hi. I'm looking for a few review swaps for my novel in progress, A Fictitious Attribution. It's a mystery/thriller/drama about a girl who discovers on her sixteenth birthday that her father is imprisoned for a crime he claims he didn't commit. It follows her attempts to exonerate him by digging up secrets of the past. If you're interested, drop your link below :) Thanks xx
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/225833

Carrie B

Please read my story and give me a review and give it a like and follow me Tiffany has had a hard life dealing with her mother and other issues she meets Ty and although they may see that they don't have anything in common at first it takes one day in court to realize that they aren't so different. This story has everything romance, drama, suspense, and thrills.
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/233186
Heaven Matthews was just a girl who moved to NYC to acquire fame. However what ... See More she didn't know were all the things she was going to have to do to keep the fame and move on to the higher levels of stardom. There were lives lost and blood on her hands. Maybe even love lost. Everything you think of about the music industry may be a huge lie. Read this, vote, follow me
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/232316

Carrie B

Heaven Matthews was just a girl who moved to NYC to acquire fame. However what she didn't know were all the things she was going to have to do to keep the fame and move on to the higher levels of stardom. There were lives lost and blood on her hands. Maybe even love lost. Everything you think of about the music industry may be a huge lie. Read this, vote, follow me
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/232316

Sabrina Ettey

Hello Everyone,

I came back again with a new update of my Thriller/Mystery story The S Girl (chapter 37 - work in progress). It would be really nice if you guys review it and let me know your feelings toward the story. As always every kind of review including constructive criticism is appreciable as it helps me to improve writing and encourage me very much. So, if you would kindly take your time to read the story and let me know about your through the review, it'd be really great and ... See More helpful.

Also, if you really think this story deserves your attention, please do vote it and comment on it. I really like to know what you think :)

For the new readers, here's the blurb of the story:

How far can one go in search of truth? Well, when it comes to her, she knows no bounds. She is a mystery, mystery is her passion, and danger is her profession.

Her name is Saravi Hussain. Just a young architect to the world, she is a woman full of mystery. The simpler she's on the outside, the more complex on the inside. The real her is the notorious and fierce spy who can go to any extent to discover the root of the crime. When she gets the job to find a thriving serial killer, who mercilessly kills young women, little she knows that this one journey will take her to the deep, dark world of crime and conspiracy. The question is, is she ready enough to test her limits? How long will she be able to hold those strong boulders? Will she be able to rip off the mask of the culprit or she'd have to be the victim like others?

Mysteries, murders, conspiracies, love, death, betrayal will be surrounded throughout the whole journey of The S Girl.

The S Girl: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/74879/

Mika Franolich

Hey everyone! So, I'm writing a horror/thriller and wondered- what are some thriller techniques you enjoy?