Thriller

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Would very much appreciate reviews / feedback of my book. https://www.inkitt.com/stories/thriller/379225

Ana :)

Would love to know if this is at all any good, please help with improving. This is a short work, which I am hoping has a little bit of a mystery, thriller hint throughout the story of a Victorian era family whose life is based on decades worth of deceit and secrecy. It would be much appreciated if you think that there is a little bit of a creepy presence. Many thanks :)

Hey Everyone! I love writing thrillers and action so I have a great book to read. Please read my action\adventure story, “Elements: The Three Clues.”

In a short summary , it is about a girl named Serena Zelay and her friend, Troy Mason. They find out they have powers including wind and water. They have to find the two other kids who posses other elements. Serena and Troy only have three clues, (and a elf,) to find the others before danger does. Will they get their before the villains, The

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No one escapes justice, be it human or God. Follow the story of Hercules and read the classical Greek myth in its modern version! Read Book 2 of Timeless Tales Series, "A Sinner's Prayer"!

Hi! Just wrote the first chapter to my horror/thriller, "Black Hollow"!

One day I saw her. And I fall in love with her in that short period of time. I thought it was just a simple "love". But it definitely wasn't like that at all. This crazy feeling in me seems to grow more as time goes by. I wish to be with her. . . Always. Now that I love her and want her to be mine forever, can I still own her? Or I'll just end up like a defeated warrior. . . Again?

Please do read my story and leave your feedback. Anyone? Thank you.

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Rüya Godwin, a notorious Assassin, living among the most feared legends of all the time, hiding and fearing the unknown. She had become one of them, dangerous and alluring.

Her breathtaking eyes, dark onyx with sprinkled star dust in them; dust of vibrant blue stars. They said she stole the beauty of stars and became darkness, as dark as spaces between stars.

She had come a long way, away from her land, away from her home. Only in search of peace, to find a way to fly away from her guilts,

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It’s a game to leave 30 groups of 10 people, aged 16-18, all in different groups out in the wild. A game that John Dean, the President of the year 3030 made clear would happen every year. And a game that there’s no getting out of. The game is to see who’s strong and who’s weak. It is always held in the same place every year, but this year is different.

Brittany, never thought that she would be picked for the game, but she knows that she will have to fight for her life for her group to

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Hello everyone,

Chapter Eighteen of Glass Alpha has just been updated and is available for you to read here: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/363391/chapters/18

Please remember to give me a review or a comment, I hope you enjoy it!

Thanks,

Aaron

Help me improve, please!

I really hope I could get a feedback from you. My story is like Fantasy, Romance, Tragic and Adventure all in one. I really hope you'll find time to read it. I really need feedbacks from you all. I need to learn more. Thank you.

The Nightmare by Denglemteprinsesse

Read The Nightmare for free on Inkitt. https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/372015?utm_source=shared_ios