"Once Upon a Time wait, no, that's a terrible beginning. Who would ever begin a story like that? Hmm….how about, Ah!"
"When the brush is a blade and the paint is my blood, small strokes can cut deep. Dreaming was against the law and everything I'd ever known. Even if I could be killed, I dared to dream."
THERE ARE ONLY 9 COPIES LEFT OF THIS TEEN AND YA DYSTOPIAN/FANTASY!
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[Robed and hooded figure walks up to the bar]
Bartender (BT): "And what c'n I get you sir?...ma'am?"
Hood (In a "sir" voice): "I need a crew."
BT: [Forgets bottles, looks around the joint] "Well, sir, all kinds come to this n'ternet estab'lsh'ment, all kinds. Who're'ya lookin' for?"
Hood: I need readers--the most critical, horrible, black-hearted, merciless readers...intelligent readers. The Stormlock Facility has released a transcript of its initial ... See More experimental procedures, entitled "Stormlock: Activation", and it must be PERFECT before it can be released into the world. We'll need their unique abilities to review it, to see that it is so."
BT: "Yeh...yessir, you've come to th'right place, I b'lieve." [Glances at you, sitting in the corner] "Where'll these poor dev'ls have to go?"
Hood: "They must come to this location..." [Holds out hand, causing coordinates to glow in the air above it]
[Standing, you see the coordinates. Where the story goes from here is up to you.]
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Hello, hello! I'll critique yours if you critique mine. I've just finished my first novella, titled "The Mechanic," and am looking for as much constructive criticism as humanly possible. I'm willing to read anything other than erotica & will give you a full-length, in-depth critique focusing on characterization, plot, setting, and style.
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Hello everyone! My novel "To Dream" has received more copies!
It's a dystopian where dreaming, creativity, and differences are banned by the government. How in the world could we write stories on Inkitt if that were the case, and what would we do without fiction, music, art, etc? The rating for the story is 13+ and it's meant for a teen and YA audience.
If you haven't read it and would like to, I'd love for your input and feedback!
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