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hi, my name is Tamil, I am writing a story. this is my first time. I just started writing out of curiosity but now I love writing. but I think I am a bit lacking. so if you guys have time kindly check out my story and give some comments or reviews about it. it would mean a lot and it will help me to improve my writing skills. thank you
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/246334?preview=true

Heena Patwa

I would love if to have someone read my books.

1) Those Blue Eyes - It's a WIP, updated regularly. It's about a girl who is sold into the mob and bounces from place to place - sweatshop, strip club, brothel, organ harvesting etc.
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/266909?utm_source=shared_ios


2) Impossible to Love- This is a complete book and part of a trilogy "The Starlite Heart". The second book is a WIP. It's a romantic medieval fantasy.
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There is no magic in this fantasy world but three different species with different abilities and different curses. The starlites who can fly but are cursed to never find love. The nymphs who can live underwater but their love means death. And the humans who live on land and can love. Sophie is a starlite soldier whose life entangles with the Prince of the human realm.

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/257732?utm_source=shared_ios

I can swap stories if anyone's interested

dwolfe24

So I have posted the second book of my series, The Adventures of Emily Tual here. Any feedback, critiques or comments would be greatly appreciated. Here's the link:
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/272417

H. K. Collins

Leo: Between The Four Sons
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/adventure/167999

saschagaladriel

Hey u guys!

My name is Sascha, I'm 18 and I'm from Denmark.
Writing in English can be a challenge since I'm not a native which is why I would love some feedback on my book: Burning Past.
It's the first book in a series on 5 books, and I really want to know whether the plot is any good or the language or grammar

I don't mind swapping stories at all! I actually think it could be fun if anyone is interested.

shaleem

Hi guys I would love some feedback on this little bit I wrote it would be much appreciated thank you its called
Not friends not enemies just strangers with memories
And her it is

I think some stories are best untold like the ones you make up in your head or the ones you'll get looked at weird if ever said.
Some people think it's weird and others think it's okay I guess it all depends on who you are and what you think is normal. I just want him to talk to me and ... See More when he does I wish he'd use his outside voice so I can hear him and not say pardon? Or sorry what was that? If only I could wish. I think I would wish for him to be younger as well at least closer to my age. although I don't know how old he is. He is so beautiful everything about him well almost everything. one he smokes cigarets which are gross and two I have no idea if he has a girlfriend...

Hayden D. Linder

Hi guys, Just got a short story approved and would love to get your input on it. This is a dramatic piece I came up with based on my favorite Twilight Zone episode by the same name. It featured the acting debut of one Robert Redford. Be warned, I blew through a box of Kleenex trying to get this thing written. It will break your heart.
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/271728

H. K. Collins

Leo: Between The Four Sons

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/adventure/167999

deannaingraham

Hello!

I am new to this site and group. I was just posting to see if anyone could give me a review on my story :) I will gladly return the favor as well. My story is called Love Always, Ella, and It's a romance novel.

I appreciate it if any of you leave a review! Like I said before, I will return the favor.


Thank you!

slugbunni

After her mother's arrest, Martha Garrett is uprooted from her less than stable life and thrust into the loud, abusive household of an uncle she never knew existed. Over the course of the year, she struggles to cope with the harsh reality of violence as she unearths a bitter truth. Genre: Drama Secondary Genre: Romance https://www.inkitt.com/stories/drama/254519 I'm happy to do a story swap for any genre **except** erotica or stories with heavily erotic overtones. The F*ck Ups is a WIP and will ... See More be updated weekly unless otherwise stated. It will touch on sensitive topics such as domestic/verbal/sexual violence and not for those easily triggered by the topics