Hello everyone! I am looking for feedback and constructive criticism. Although I have been writing my entire life, this is the first time I have ever put anything online. The biggest challenge for me has always been commas and apostrophes! My sincerest thanks to anyone who takes the time to read it. :)
'The Line' is a science-fiction/action story set in a gritty future. Recently released from the Prison, Daryl Rhys is manipulated into accepting a suicidal mission. The unique former ... See More Criminal, however, is far more dangerous than anyone suspects.
Hello, hello! This all exciting and new for me, and I just hope that people like my stories and get something worthwhile from them. So here's the thing, I'm currently writing a story (a work- long work- in progress), and so far, I've got about three chapters down. I'd love it if people would read my work and comment or provide feedback for what I've got done so far, and give some helpful pointers and/or constructive criticism. Here's the link to my newest story: JUST DREAMING
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'Just Dreaming' is a story about a young teen stuck in the past. Mourning the loss of her younger brother, Alis Melissa Velle struggles to continue her life as it was, trying to fight past the blockades of her drunken father and helpless mother. As she learns to deal with her grief, Alis is confronted with the changes that nearly every teenage girl faces in the midst of a chaotic high school life- all which include academics, athletics, BFF issues, bullies, and potential boyfriends. Filled with high-spirited humor and tantalizing romance, 'Just Dreaming' is a budding book designed to entice the readers' hearts and minds.
Hey lovely people :) I was wondering if I could get some feedback on my three stories (all are in the novel contest) Here are the links (and short synopses)
The Child from Hell: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/92275?preview=true&ref=a_815c7c23-0726-4804-a915-114f4d534326 - About the son of Satan, Lucifer Jr., escaping Hell and traveling the world to evade his father so he won't have to be sent back to his home. While fleeing to another state, he meets a devout Christian girl ... See More who he falls in love with, but can't let her find out who he really is.
An Accidental Evil: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/92266?preview=true&ref=a_815c7c23-0726-4804-a915-114f4d534326 - An ex heroin addict and alcoholic, Skylar Maddick now faces schizophrenia with deprecatory voices in his head telling him he's never good enough. While touring the world with his band, he meets the girl of his dreams in Tokyo, but the voices in his head are holding him back.
Get Out Alive : https://www.inkitt.com/stories/action/93255/chapters/1?preview=true&ref=a_815c7c23-0726-4804-a915-114f4d534326 = Have you ever wondered what you'd be like in a crisis? Like a zombie apocalypse or maybe a fire? Well, those were the last things on Margaery's mind as she sat through stats class fearing finals and stressing over having a crush on her best friend. Though when the school is taken over by a cult full of students with guns, she and her friends take the roles of heroes as they try to save their school and get out alive.
Hope you enjoy :) Thank you!
Hi everybody! I am Dean, a traveling writer (and this is the reason why I consider my home our beautiful planet) and an Amazon.it best-selling author. Obviously love reading but also photography and I've been for 18 years an independent TV producer (travel-adventure documentaries series). I wrote four novels so far but "Quantum - The Trilogy Begins" is the first one available in English and here is the link:
Follow me on my FB, Twitter and Instagram accounts and on my site (www.deandeservienti.com): in the next couple of month I will launch a contest for all my readers and two of them will be invited to spend three days with me and my team in Miami to follow the path of Quantum's characters!
Drop me a line or two, I can communicate in English, French, Spanish and Italian!
Have a wonderful day!
Hey guys, I'd love some feedback on my book if anyone's willing?
Blurb: Set in the future, civilization is on the rebound from an apocalyptic event. We meet Dionysus, the most notorious criminal to be found with murder and arson as just the tip of the iceberg! But Cynthia might just discover that he's not such a bad guy after all, in fact he may just be a good guy in disguise.
Hey you guys! So i'm kind of new to this site, but have been writing this story for a while now! If you could give it a look and let me know what you think by writing a review, I'd really appreciate it!
Hey! I just published a new shorter novel called Get Out Alive in which an average high school student changes from stressing out over finals and having a crush on her best friend to surviving a school shooting.
If you're interested in reading here is the link:https://www.inkitt.com/stories/action/93255/chapters/1?preview=true&ref=a_815c7c23-0726-4804-a915-114f4d534326
Malcolm here from Scotland. I love to write and to read! So, I've gone ahead and posted my story - Travel to Sockland up here. It's fantasy (As I'm sure the name suggests). It probably fits as a Children's novel, but I like it too, so I'm sure anyone might like it. It's short, fun and wacky. I like wacky!
Feel free to enjoy it. And say hello to me!
Hey! So I currently have two novels, they're currently in the Novel Competition so I'd really appreciate it if you gave them a read! Here are the links The Child from Hell: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/92275?preview=true&ref=a_815c7c23-0726-4804-a915-114f4d534326
An Accidental Evil: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/92266?preview=true&ref=a_815c7c23-0726-4804-a915-114f4d534326 . An Accidental Evil is about a 22 year old named Skylar in a rock band struggling to juggle ... See More his fame, his schizophrenic depression, and a hopeless love life. The Child From Hell is about Satan's son escaping Hell and evading his father while pursuing a relationship with a devout Christian. If you want me to read one of your stories, please leave a link below and I will! Thanks!
Would love your input. I want to evoke emotion and show, don't tell. I have several books published. One novel and three non fiction. Would love your feedback! I have a motion picture studio interested and a few agents mulling. It is not yet complete. Thank you!
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