Hi everyone. My name is Tina Brewster and I write mysteries with my partner under the pen name Williams Brewster. I also write lesbian fiction under the pen name M. E. Tudor.
We have posted our story Treacherous Secrets here on Inkitt. It's a murder mystery about a housewife, Emily who finds out that her husband, Kenton had been hiding many secrets that get him murdered. Although Emily has a good alibi, there are several people who might have wanted Kenton dead. It's a cozy mystery ... See More with lots of margaritas and surprises. I'm hoping to get a few beta readers to check the story out and let me know what you think. I'm not great with punctuation and I want to know if the mystery is a good mystery. Thanks in advance. I would consider beta reading someone else's story, especially another mystery.
Here's the link to our story: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/81625?ref=a_358089eb-33a6-498e-99cf-6de87f0e0d82
Looking for some thoughts on my YA Romance. It's got a lot of fluff in it, but there is a mystery as well. I'll post a link and the teaser below. It's pretty rough right now as I started writing it when I was young but I am looking to rewrite it. I promise it gets better the further you go. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
Winifred thought that she was ... See More a normal girl until members of the Royal Guard showed up at her house. Suddenly she is thrust into a world of political intrigue, ancient oaths, and deadly mystery.
Hello, fellow writers!
I'm glad to have a chance to be able to express my thoughts, feelings and imaginations through writing. Don't we have such an enjoyable art? It's incredible that we can connect to each other from around the globe through use of the Internet - it expands our community and gives us a chance to build each other as writers.
We write for diverse reasons and genres, but I'm sure I'm not alone in wanting to give the best of myself in my writing and in my ... See More beta-reading. This is a deeply personal field that we dare to reveal ourselves in, after all. That said, I have a bit of a problem and would like some advice.
You see, I currently need a beta reader. I am eager to do my share and be a beta reader in return, but I am concerned about being able to accept a beta-reading trade. When I write, I write for a mainstream audience, but in all aspects of my life, my religion remains important to me. Naturally, this includes both writing and reading.
To stick to my standards, I would love to work with family-friendly fiction while I'm beta-reading. Could I request help finding a beta-reading exchange? Is anyone looking for a similar deal, or does anyone have any ideas of where to look?
I'm trying to complete a young adult fantasy novel called Tunisa. Most of the story is in a Google Doc, but the first four chapters can be found here: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/41845?ref=a_2624dbe6-fdf8-497c-94f4-0dfa450b25a6.
When Stephen Boyer came to Mekwek as a refugee, he carried his home country in his heart. Now as an apprenticed sorcerer, he conceals his full origins from those around him. He and his brother must survive bandits and dragon raids as they pursue their dreams of peace between two species.
Hello all, I'm looking for beta feedback for my historical/mystery novella, The Butcher of Barclay's Hollow, the story of Patrick Conroy, a victorian butcher who has reluctantly been assigned the role of village policeman, as he's called on to solve the unexplained death of a retired vicar. At 30,000 words its a short read and I would love to get some critical feedback on the finished story, style etc.
... See More />https://www.inkitt.com/stories/mystery/17961?ref=a_36d2be01-4193-4301-b3e0-160c0e8fec57
Any reviews would be greatly appreciated.
Hello. When I first started here, I put up my first story. The Innocent Heart. The first book has good views and the second about half of it. The Book two of the Innocent Heart isnt completed yet. What I want to know is how to improve my writing. I love writing them, but I have some concerns that I need or would like addressed. Ever since writing Abnormal Cataclysm and I have a lot of readers for it. Compared to the Innocent Heart, Abnormal Cataclysm seem written better.
My question ... See More is are there some improvements I should make for the Innocent Heart series? Am I too wordy, descriptive or something else? Please let me know as I am thinking about re writing them. I still have a lot to write for my Innocent Heart series. Its a series of stories around a woman named Ashlyn Sadie Techryn.
Hello - would love to get some feedback on three of my stories posted under fanfiction. I am relatively new to writing and sharing my work (about a year now); and would like to know how I can improve. Two of the stories are based on the television series The Musketeers; and one for the television show Dominion. They include action/adventure/introspection/friendship; and are for most anyone who enjoy a good "journey". They are quick reads, and I hope enjoyable. Thank you.
Hello! I am an aspiring writer. And I am searching for some help.
My first language is not English so I was wondering if anybody here could be my beta reader to catch my mistakes before I could even post them? I have 5 chapters of my sci-fi novel already uploaded here and I am slowly editing the rest of them - in order to post them here too. I would welcome every kind of feedback - it helps me to get better. I know I have my mistakes while writing, but hopefully some of you will help me ... See More become better than I am. My novel Wayland is slowly uploaded in here: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/79677?ref=a_c714ca4f-df88-44ac-9091-90b3f6844e02&started_reading=true
Thank you for any kind of feedback. I appreciate them all.
Hello fellow Inkitt members! I have been writing for most of my life and have had a few friends here and there willing to read my stories. I've gotten good reviews from them, but the opinion of a friend or family member isn't always fully reliable; they can either be overly critical to where they tear it apart (which fortunately hasn't happened) or they can be too nice and just tell me it's great, which I think has happened before. So, I'm here to get the feedback of strangers for my series, Eli
Fletcher. I have the first book posted on my page and entered into The Novelist contest. If you're into urban fantasies that are heavily based on the Supernatural (mostly angels and demons) then this is right up your alley. As the series progresses, other elements are added (Greek gods, werewolves and vampires, etc.) to cause you to wonder if there is some validity to their existence in our fiction.
Anyhow, if you'd like to be a beta reader for me, that would be awesome. I only have the first book of the series up, but have the first four completed. I plan on adding the others as soon as I get some feedback on the first one. Also, if you have something of yours you'd like read, let's help each other out and read/critique our works together!
Hello! My name is Brenda, but my pen name is Reese Kelly. I am new to Inkitt, but I have been on other author sites. I have been writing since I could form sentences, and it has always been an escape from reality to me. I generally write supernatural books, but I have been working towards some general fiction. I have two books currently posted on my page, but I will be adding a few more over the next few days, so if there is anyone who would like to read them and leave a comment or two on what
needs work, or how you felt I would be very grateful.
Here is a link to my profile: https://www.inkitt.com/Reese_Kelly?ref=v_ef15cad0-2929-47c2-9825-ad13b4b2f1ca
I will post a summary for my first book, and links for both. If you feel interested, please go check them out!
"After the Great War between the Lupus Sanguine and the Vampires, there is finally a fragile peace taking place between the werewolves and vampires. And Krista Calvin will be the one to shatter it all. Being the runt of the litter, Krista has been pushed aside by her family for her failing combat skills and her lack of care towards training in general, but her family does not know the darkness that lurks within her.
Being the descendant of the Great Alpha Grayson and former Queen of the Vampires Lana, Krista was destined to be different, but that is only if she can fight the evil that threatens to consume her and those around her. Krista wants nothing other than to hide away, and read her books, but with a dangerous prophecy hanging over her head, and a strange bond with the vampires she was raised to hate, it seems that fate has other plans for the small she-wolf.
Will she fight and survive, or will she drown under the darkness?"
"My wish was finally granted and death embraced me like a lost child, holding tightly and never letting go."
Again, thank you!
Hello everyone! My name is Farah, I am 25 years old aspiring writer. I have been self-taught in writing for the past 10 years, and only recently, gained the courage to come out and have my stories shown to the world. I am looking for anyone who is willing to become my beta-reader for any of my stories:
To The Red Line fantasy/adventure (completed) https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/66759?ref=a_052750d4-6284-4fd2-9e8b-19b7c8800fc7
To The Red Line II (ongoing) ... See More https://www.inkitt.com/stories/adventure/81486/chapters/1?preview=true&ref=a_052750d4-6284-4fd2-9e8b-19b7c8800fc7
A Modern Fairy Tale Romance (ongoing) https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/73504/chapters/1?preview=true&ref=a_052750d4-6284-4fd2-9e8b-19b7c8800fc7
My big problem has always been grammatical errors; I tend to get confused between the past tense and past present tense (English is my 2nd language). But I am trying my hardest improving that area. Other than that, I am hoping that maybe you could help me to reconstruct some wordings.
I am prepared to hear any positive and harsh criticisms.
Many thanks! XOXO
Do you want to get some constructive feedback on your work by one of our very own beta-readers? Get it ready!
Here are some tips: