First and foremost, I would like to thank you for reading this post. I know there are a lot of really good authors on here who are in my exact same position so I want to make it absolutely clear that your participation is greatly appreciated. With that said, I was hoping to enlist the help of anyone willing to read my book, The Scion: Declaration. My book is primarily an action driven story about a man with a tragic past trying to resurrect his family name but nothing goes as ... See More planned and he is forced to make changes to a plan he barely even knew in the first place. I am a college student studying English and History but I began writing long before I changed my major to reflect my passion, kind of my literal reason for living. Writing is what made it possible for me to forgive myself for blowing a Division 1 football scholarship that would have seen me in the NFL. I have no accolade and I have no titles. I am just a regular guy who read a lot of Conn Iggulden, Robert Jordan, Brandon Sanderson, GRRM, JK, James Clavell and felt the urge to create a universe and fill this universe with wonderful stories. However, my writing abilities have yet to match my imagination and this is where everyone here comes in. I feel like my strength is in my dialogue but my scene setting ability and descriptiveness need work. Unfortunately, I had no way of confirming my suspicions of my writing until now. I know my writing is far from perfect (is really far from anything even resembling a notion of perfection) and my grammar is atrocious but I am quite literally begging everyone to read my book and tell me where I need to improve. I will do review swaps with anyone who asks.
Once again, I thank you for your time in reading this post. Have an wonderful day.
Hello everyone. Thank you to everyone who has read/reviewed/reserved my story and continues to show their support by reading so. There are 19 copies left of my novel with the analytic bar nearly complete. I'm still looking for readers who haven't read my story "Keep your promises" to read,reserve a copy and review which I will do as well. It means a lot to me since my story is entered for the novel competition. It's hard to get readers to read your story, so I understand how everyone else is in
the same place as me. I'm just hoping you all will give me a chance and if you haven't read, you will read and reserve a company. All feedback both positive and negative is appreciated since it allows me to grow as a writer.
Thank you all.
May I have your kind attention to read my current work in progress (17 chapters by now) Thriller/Mystery novel named 'The S Girl.' Reviewing the story will be much helpful for me. All kinds of review including critiques and point outs will be truly appreciated.
'The S Girl' is a story about a Bangladeshi spy Saravi Hussain who's mission is to find a mysterious serial killer, and throughout her journey, she has been trapped by an unknown enemy. There's a ... See More conspiracy going on against her. But who could be the real culprit? If you are interested to know, then please read the novel below:
Thanks in advance.
Hi everyone, my name is Edith and I'm new to the Inkitt family. I've submitted my novel, Time From the Past, in the novel contest. Below gives you a summary of it. Just a heads up, it is an erotica novel about Father Time. I posted a little while back, but didn't have but one response. Please help a beginning writer with advice or/and suggestions.
Pera is happy with the life she’s built. Than life is in jeopardy, however, when strange dreams begin to affect her new life. A disturbed ... See More man stalks her dreams, making demands for her timepiece. A timepiece she knows nothing about. Or does she? When Titan shows up, her life’s foundation is rocked even more. But has he shown up in time to save the life she’s built? To save her?
Titan, a hulking Adonis, is a warrior for Time. Finding and protecting the Past Time Elements is his reason for being. Finding a mate wasn’t part of that plan. Discovering a new part of himself, Titan must choose between protecting Pera and protecting Time itself.
I think my grammar is fine and layout, but I'm sure I've missed a few typos or made a small mistakes. I believe it could use a little more description, you know, to give it more color and feeling. That is my weakest point I believe. As this is my first attempt to write, but not my last, I'd like to get better and learn from others what I can. This is going to be the first novel in a trilogy. Any advice or pointers would be greatly appreciated. I did submit it as complete, but can gladly make any suggested changes. Lots of thanks y'all. :) please click on my link below to help a novice author. https://www.inkitt.com/stories/erotica/124900
Fantastic response to The Kafené thus far, so a big thank you to all who are currently reading it.
If any beta-reader fancies a dark nineteen-sixties period drama, I would be delighted if you read/reviewed my novel. The Kafené is a period drama with a dark twist that follows the story of a young Cypriot woman whose small, idyllic town on the southeastern corner of the island becomes embroiled in a series of domestic and political scandal.
Old ... See More sins cast long shadows...and there are secrets in this town that are resurfacing that could tear it apart.
Click here: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/other/120693
Review for review, my Inkitt coworker?
Our book title is #PositivePsychThings, here is what we are about:
Positive psychology. The science of human flourishing. It is not a field of Psychology, but a new way of looking at the science of the human mind.
This art book is a Gen-Y/Millenial collab by the 20- and 21- year old Juan Bros as we attempt to bring the science which has defined happiness ("subjective well-being") to laypeople through funny, profound, and ... See More positively positive poetry.
29 Copies Left, hope they will all be gone soon. Analytic bar nearly full. Still looking for readers to reserve copy/read and review. Thank you to everyone who has read my story/reserved a copy, reviewed it, shared it on social media. It really means a lot to me and I really want to thank everyone. I appreciate both constructive and positive feedback. I love writing, and hope to be a published author one day. My story is of romance/mystery. It's about a girl called Scarlett, who is on a mission
to find a lost child. But she soon realizes that the people around her, aren't who they seem to be.
But soon she makes an embarking discovery, that changes her life and shapes all she has known about the world.
My best strengths is creating characters that are relatable, my weakness is my grammar and over describing everything. I have always loved writing, and write stories on movellas, another writing community.
Thank you to everyone who will read my novel and will reserve a copy of my novel.
Hello! I just received my first review for my book, "The Pact." I want to say thank you! I'm still looking for a review for my book," Fallen."
I appreciate all feedback!
If you like space operas and traditional Star Trek themes about overcoming racial hatred, then "Warriors of the Hollow World" (https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/50637) might be the book for you. Feedback, reviews, or exchange of feedback and reviews would be great. Thanks.
Hello, I'm a new writer, and I just posted a story up. I would like to get some feedback first before I submit it to the contest.
"The Pact" is a story about werewolves and vampires. It's a tale about a boy running away from the dangers of life only to find himself in a more compromising situation. But as he delves into this supernatural world, he finds out mysteries of his past that will affect his future. Maybe he'll stop running!
If you're interested in reading more, ... See More please click here: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/horror/135351?started_reading=true
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