Hi! I just currently finished writing my first novel, and I was hoping to receive any kind of feedback as it's my first attempt at a full-length novel. It's about a teenager named Avery who receives an offer for the 'adventure of a lifetime' from a girl who she looks up to, only she warns Avery that she will hate her by the end of it. My goal in writing this novel was to write a YA novel with a fresh twist...Avery isn't the common character who craves an adventure, and has to fight her comfort
zone as Eden leads her through the road trip of a lifetime.
If anyone is willing to read my book (133 pages, so it's not super long! :p ), I'd gladly return the favour. Thanks so much!
I was wondering if anyone wanted to check out my YA dystopian-fantasy "To Dream". I'd be happy to swap.
Here are some of the latest reviews:
"This author has opened a door to the world not seen in the literary world before. Sure she takes on the idea of a dystopian world that we all have seen on the silver screen or read but her twist is original and unique immediately drawing the reader in from the first paragraph. Part of the reason I personally was ... See More drawn to her story is my own love of dreaming and the imaginative release dreams bring me. After all in my own writing dreams and daydreams are vital! The main character's voice is endearing and you really feel as though you experience the story through them. Great read I hope to buy on a bookstore shelf soon!"
"This deserves more reads"
"Even if the setting seems familiar, the story remains unique. Characters were relate-able as well as clever dialogue drove the story home. This really deserves more reads. Grammar wise it is good and plot structure and scene planning was excellent. Loved the whole twisted family dynamic and it gave body and flavor to the story. The whole dreaming gives talents was a nice touch and gave it sort of a magical / super powered feel to them. Things we take for granted. Well done. Keep them coming"
hi my next book to carnival of lycans is in the works, it's coming along pretty good just due to health issues i have been having, it should be out mid may 2017 for those who liked it and want more
got writer's block anyone got ideas
I came up with a lot for a book, and I was just wondering; what genre would be a story about a girl and a guy who try to get over what they were sent to a care center for? I thought of romance as the second genre, but what would be the first?
Hello everyone! I'm here looking to see if anyone would like to assist me in a story I'm writing. Unfortunately I'm not that informed in terms of English grammar, despite that being my first language (so sad). As of now now I'm writing a guilty pleasure story for myself revolving around an alien invasion scenario. I already released the first chapter on my account, I won't share a link cause I'm not a shameless self promoted unless told I'm allowed to be. So you can take a glance at "The War in
Heaven" from there.
Long story short, I'm asking if anyone would like to be a second pair of eyes for me. x3
Anyone here willing to SWAP? My story "To Dream" is in some need of some more reviewers and feedback. READ BELOW IF INTERESTED:
"To Dream" is a YA dystopian-fantasy where dreams, creativity, and ambitions are banned by the government. My main character Calista has to discover what makes her who she is, and (since it's dystopian) attempt to take down the dictatorship with the help of her friends. There are oracles with prophecies, different arts like music and painting, action, ... See More mystery, and a question we all must ask ourselves. "Would we dare to follow our dreams despite adversity?" I try to tackle a whole lot of themes in this book, the subject of dreams and ambition being one of them, passivity and love vs violence, trust, family, and self discovery. The book is rated 13+ for the violence and some mild language, is meant for a TEEN-YA AUDIENCE, and has 38 chapters.
I'm a teenage writer (17) so I know a lot of YA cliches and things that get on teenagers' nerves while reading these books. (Typical female protagonist, insta-love, love triangles, very cliche "stereotype" characters, etc.) I'd love to know your feedback on the plot and characters of the story.
It's a part of a series, so I want to know fan-favorites so that way I know whether to include more of them in future books.
**Please let me know if you are going to read it below and post a link to one of your stories. I'd love to help out other authors.
Hello, i'm kinda new to this but i just wanted to inform you guys that i'm writing a book called Hearts of Souls oh and the link below is a free copy . i Would love to hear your opinion about my stories so leave a review thanks fellow members
Whats up guys and girls,
so i have this idea I have been playing with for a story fell in love with it but want to know if people see it working or if its my wacky mind loving nothing with passion.
alien finally landed taught humans that things are not so straight forward as we think it is and begin twisting our worlds of fantasy and realities together people and creatures would live within bubbles of realities crossing the outer boundary of that bubble changes the rules ... See More from say a world war two full on battle to a scfi space propelling adventure. humans get to realise they can control it and things go awoll ...........
ideas to take this in i dont want a cliche tale
Also if any of you are interested in sports... mainly basketball, please be my guest
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