Hello my fellow Inkitts' just joined here! (migrated from Wattpad). Feel free to check out my modern Werewolf tale and let me know what you think! <3 Would love some feed back on chapter length as I know it's over the recommended count. Should a split some chapters in two? Also let me know if you would like specific feedback on your works!
Status: On going- updates every Wed. 12 pm EST time
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"All the better to please you with, my dear."
By day, Ally-fondly known as Red-is CEO of one of the biggest sweet treat conglomerates in the country; rolling out baked goods from east to west. But her work doesn't stop there. By night, she's on the hunt for answers to a grisly murder, which may be the key to unravelling her past.
A trail of crumbs leads her into the underbelly of the city, a world of deception bathed in blood-Vincent Wolf's territory. The kingpin of the underworld and the new face of Wall Street, Vincent is as handsome as he is deadly; a man who gets what he wants, and his sights are set on Ally's company. On a mission of his own to save his people, Vincent will stop at nothing to devour the corporation she worked so hard for-and her along with it.
A modern twist on a classic tale that you can really sink your teeth into. Hold on tight, ladies and gents. It's a bloody ride filled with lust, deception, and wild-things.
Link: <a href="https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/688050/chapters/3#position-2" target="_blank">https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/688050/chapters/3#position-2</a>
