I am having trouble editing my writings. One particular story, I have re-edited six times, trying every trick in the book. After each edit when I check the story, it is the way it was before I edited it. If anyone knows how to re-edit a submitted story, please let me know.
I just wrote A new chapter for my book one step and I really need some feedback on it, if someone doesn't mind I'd be so grateful!
Bloom the first installment of The Kingdom of Archer series tells the story of Lyric Mason and Prince Parker Archer. Caught in the middle of a world where human males can transform into hybrid animals known as Novas and the world is divided in two. The Kingdom of Archer, a fair ruling kingdom and Cray; the kingdom of poverty and dictatorship. When Lyric is found to be the soulmate of not only Prince Parker but the evil Prince of Cray, Max. Lyric is caught in the middle of a tug of war and love.. ... See More Can Lyric, who has a painful past she wants to forget fit the role of queen an overcome her past demons and insecurities? Will love triumph over all? https://www.inkitt.com/stories/134198/chapters/1?preview=true
Hello, my new story needs your help to read and review.
Needing help for Grammar editing using Grammar lee has been too tedious for me as I don't have the full version and I do have a lot of good knowledge on Grammar, so I'm a little stuck there.
I don't own Mircosoft word nor do I have a copy of it so I only use Google docs but I've been searching around for any help when it comes to editing as it, not my best area as when I look back at my work I miss see paragraphs of mistakes as I don't understand what I would find wrong, such commas, ... See More repetition. Or punctuation as well, I can write a story full out but when going back to edit that what thing I need more help on.
I have a question : would you prefer a story about a family's problems, caused mysteriously by a ghost, or rather the problems between a mother and her daughter. The characters would be the same, but with different plots. Here are the two teasers:
A) Haley Hanlon has just lost her baby, semi-failed her career, and is about to discover her daughter's darkest secrets. Her daughter, on the other hand, has changed from the angelical child to the demon kid, out to sail through ... See More secondary. However, when problems come, it's her mother who gets the worst of it.
B) In 2002, Rake Arms was run over on his way to an important meeting. The driver of the car? No one other than Haley Hanlon, pregnant with her second baby. Since then, Rake had become a phantom, out for revenge. One by one, he causes different acts of mischief, each becoming bigger and bigger. The problems rise between Haley and her daughter, reaching a crescendo. Then, suddenly, there's a new girl, and emotions are about to get even bigger.
Which one would you be interested to read in / which one is more intriguing? Also, do you prefer a story, which is interesting and thrilling, or a story full of perhaps drama, emotions and a moral?
Thanks for your input!
I've finished the first part of my Shadows of Dystopia trilogy, which follows a young boy named Hugo. His father disappears when he is young abducted by creature subtle knowed as a reaper but the kind creature is hidden to them. Hugo has attempted to look for his father only to find darker secrets within his kingdom he never of. Such as Gods living as kings, sin which secretly govern the land in dark sectors of each tribe.
I'm still learning both writing and editing skill and on the ... See More lookout for anything that can help with grammar?
Hoping to make my sentence structure and punctuation more readable but that been a fair amount of a struggle.
Hope to get some form of feedback any tips and tricks that can help.
I am attempting to write a book about my life with some details and all names changed of course and would love feedback.
When is making the reader figure it out pretentious or too much? Does anyone have any suggestions for reading material that contain ambiguous/artistic endings as study material? a la Slaughterhouse Five
I like fucking with analypsis, but I got one review that said it's too confusing. Does anyone know any good techniques in doing flashbacks with a story that begins at the end? Can you do a flashback within a flashback? Or do you have to write it out and tell the whole background as opposed to having the reader re-living it?
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