I just posted the first two chapters of my novel, and am looking for some feedback. The genres are Action/Adventure. I would like to enter it into a competition once it's all been updated as currently, it is a work in progress, but I'm not entirely sure of which category it would fall under. It's not exactly a fantasy novel as the elements are realistic.
Anyone who feels like reading it can find it at the link below:
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Any, and all feedback/reviews are welcome, and I will review back to those who do.
I'm looking for some feedback on my fantasy pulp fiction work. It's a cross between Indiana Jones and Harry Potter. Many thanks.
Magik: Search for the Tome
Buried beneath the sands of Egypt is centuries of history as well as artefacts of untold beauty as well as power. When fledging archaeologist Matthew Tan discovers an ancient ... See More tablet inside the inner tomb of Pharaoh Setos II alongside his former professor, little did he know that his entire life would be changed forever. The young man is now drawn into a war between the forces of good and evil. A war which has been going on in the shadows for centuries.
When the tablet is stolen, the fledging archaeologist must now race against the clock to prevent the forces of evil from using the tablet, lest they use its immense power to turn the war into their favour.
Hello to the group,
I will review anyone's work in return for a review of my non-space sci-fi/thriller novel, which has been entered in the Sci-Fi Novelist contest. Due to the length of the book I will review 2 of yours provided the word count does not exceed 80k. I'm fine with any genre except over-the-top erotica and uber gross novels. You can get to my book from my profile page. Looking forward to reading some great stories - Thank you!
I am looking for feedback on my contemporary romance fiction novel set in Nigeria, West Africa. I am also happy to swap with another author.
Ifeoma and her sisters escaped an emotionally abusive father to start a new life in Lagos. She is determined to never let another ... See More man have control over her, even if that means never falling in love. That is until she meets Chuma, a wealthy and domineering man who is exactly the kind of man she is determined to stay away from but somehow can’t seem to keep away from. An unlikely relationship develops, taking them from joy to a devastating loss and finally to betrayal. Ifeoma must decide, but she is torn between her painful past and a chance at a future with Chuma….
Chuma is a cut-throat obsessive financial mogul whose sole purpose in life is to is to make his family name great. And he is determined to let nothing distract him from achieving his goal. But when he meets Ifeoma, an elusive, hardworking chef, he finds himself irresistibly drawn to her. They embark on a turbulent journey of friendship and love which is eventually shattered by tragedy. Chuma wants to heal the rift that has grown between them and will go to any lengths to do so. However, he encounters secrets from her past
Just entered the Fantasy Novelist competition for my book THE CATASTROPHE OF THE EMERALD QUEEN.
It's a story for older children (but can be enjoyed by everyone over the age of about 10) with huge anti-bullying themes.
"Eleven year old Sophie Roberts is in a coma in hospital following a car accident.
When bored and curious eleven year old boy Jared Miller stumbles upon a monstrous assassin in her room, he and Sophie are saved only by ... See More the intervention of a warrior from the magical world of Alegria, a world linked to our own by Sophie and a world which is in dire peril as long as she remains in her coma.
Kidnapped and taken to Alegria, Jared is the only person that can save the kingdom from the evil King James and restore it to its former peaceful glory.
But he is also the key that could bring an end to Alegria forever."
Please take a look, all reviews and feedback reciprocated.
I entered the horror contest, just looking for some views/reviews and I always review back so check it out.
GREEN SUNDAY is a zombie novel with a twist.
TJ, a neckbeard youtuber meets a strange girl, unfortunately unaware she’s the star of a deebweb gameshow set on tearing his small town apart.
I'm 1 hit wonder, well hopefully 1 hit wonder.
Story is Balinese Puppet Shadows. It is about Asian Catholic girl who grows up poor in Silicone Valley, California before Silicon.
Originally a devout Catholic she becomes a sinner. She marries older white neighbor in Tropicana Village and is a virgin on the alter.
During the 1970's sexual revolution she commits adultery and thereafter lives a life of secret wantonness until an old lady.
I appreciate brutal reviews.
Hi there! I'm hoping to get some reviews on a Crime/Thriller novel I just posted called "Operator". It's the first original novel I've ever written and I'm really nervous about it to be honest, but I'd love any feedback I could possibly get for it - I want it to be my best work yet!
Hello everyone! It's me, Nights33, and I am looking for some reviews for my first novel submitted to this website called, (The Siribi Chronicles) Anansi's Web. It's a YA fantasy story, about a boy traveling to a city for a special event, but when he gets to the city nothing is quite what it seems, and he gets wrapped up in this huge issue involving kings, and secrets, and a really big war.
If you're interested, I would really appreciate your time, and if you want I will review some of ... See More your story as well!
Greetings and salutations everyone!
I just posted my first novel, Kiss of the Boogeyman, on Inkitt a couple of days ago and entered it into the Horror Contest. I'm looking for feedback, constructive criticism, and advice. It's a Horror novel, but I suppose you could call it Horror/Fantasy. Here's the link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/horror/84555?ref=a_c5a14fc5-90b4-4adf-9dca-9df42d3827cf&utm_source=shared_web
My gratitude to you all.
Joshua "Biggie" Simpkins
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