09 The Climax / Building Suspense

Hey y’all peeps! I was wondering if you wanted to check out my book “Saved” it is probably the definition of suspense, because it is a murder mystery with twisted romance in it! It’s still in progress, but I think I have been doing really good with developing the story but I am always welcomed to comments and criticism if needed! Thank you readers here’s my link below to find out more!!

https://www.inkitt.com/kara164

Hi guys!! If you want to read some erotic fantasy romance, check out my book "Accepting the Demon's Proposal"

Blurb: Being kidnapped right after school, Catina's world turns into a complete fantasy. Will she be able to continue with her life? Or will the Demon take over her?

Excerpt: He pressed his face into my neck and bit hard, my skin clamped tight between his sharp teeth. "Ow! I thought you were going to be gentle," I complained. "I am," he mumbled and licked the bite on my

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Hey there!

I hope that you and your family are doing well.

I was wondering if you can check out my book called Blood Moon Rising. If you're interested in sinking your teeth into hot vampires, feisty heroines, deadly town secrets, and lots of drama (maybe an apocalypse eek!), then you might want to consider checking this out!

Here's the link: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/574880

Have a great day ☺️❤️

Heyy! New here! So, i wanted to write this story for a long time now, i called it "The Moon Chaser" which is about this kid, Leo, whose dad dies of cancer when he was 6, and since then, as his dad had said "if i could i'd get you the Moon" before dying, his wish was ti go to the Moon. At 29, After lots of difficulties, he makes it to the Moon, after lots of things happened, like becoming father after being raped at 22/23. I love this idea honestly, but i have no clue how to develop the story, ... See More

What's up people, I have a new story, Her vendetta, is all about love and revenge and every other thing in between. Would love it if you gave it a trial. Thanks.

Hay I'm Kevin Earth ... First Time in a long Time Writer. Turning The power Of thoughts into < Wait For It > The Greatest Story Ever Told ☆

Hi guys, I'm new here and would like you to give your feedbacks about my first novel.It's a teen or YA fantasy novel set in the magical world of elves. The protagonist will learn magic and fight monsters.If you are a fan of the Percy Jackson series and the Chronicles of Narnia then this is the book for you. Reviews are really appreciated.(Chapter 6 is out now)Dawnborne Legacy: Liberation of Velarone https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/496913

Teen Romance:

A Teenage boy Matt from bumping into Rose Green literally, in a wedding he finds himself facing hurdle after hurdle in the quest to taking his place in her heart, a heart that is apparently not ready to accommodate him. Outgoing, suave Scott has his place sealed firmly in Rose’s heart. And nothing would upturn it. That is until an accident change everything.

Hey, I want to inform you if you give some of your precious time to read my story. It's my first time and I need some reviews. If my give simple comments I will be very grateful for that.

Love hidden by arrogance

"Do you always walk without looking or you have vision problem" he said. I am out of my temper by his sentance. "It's occur because of you which always come in my way". Stafina hart girl with sweet, inocent, pure, beautiful but sassy so how fall in love with arrogant, cold, unsocial

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The Nightmare

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/horror/439030

It is little bit edited.Can you read it now ?