SweetNovember48
Hi Taylor. Glad to hear that you are so passionate about writing. I have a few books I'm reading already and also working on mine. But once I have finished with the other books I am reviewing, I would love to read yours.
Y0UR_N0T_AL0NE
@SweetNovember48 I appreciate your condolence in taking the time, and reading this post. Reading is so ecstatic! And interesting! I'll take the time to read your working progress.
Fallen9980
Hello everyone! My name is Hazel and was hoping for some reviews on my YA Romance novel Forever Yours! It can be a bit cliche in the romantic aspect but it also touches other topics, such as friendship, loss, determination and trust! Some of the characters are modeled after real people from my past! Check it out below! https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/247325?utm_source=shared_ios
SweetNovember48
Hello All. I would love some feedback on my book, if you are able. I am excited to hear what you think.
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/other/255008
It's called The Prohibited: Violet's Journey. It's an exciting journey of a young girl with remarkable abilities that take her into a realm of love, anger and protection.
Ccarter
Hello everyone, I'm new here.... Ready and eager to explore and learn as well as share thoughts and ideas on poetry and lyrical writings. Thank you
Patricia Knight
Hi everyone, I'm new here, any tips on getting your book reviewed are greatly appreciated, thank you and happy writing =)
Ashila Anja
Good morning, good afternoon, good evening, wherever you are lovely people!
I'm new on Inkitt. Please, can you guys check my first story called 'Queen Leia'? It's kinda romantic and cheesy book, but I promise it's not about love story only. It's about life and some lessons to take that I think it's fit with teenagers problems nowadays. It's not completed, but I'll update many chapters as best as I can. Don't forget to leave traces, anything, because it'd mean the world to me.
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/>I hope we're all great writers could work together so our stories will be heard and read by many people! :)
InfinitePeaceXx
Hello everyone!
Can you guys please check out my first story "My New Neighbour" here on inkitt. Your feedbacks would help a lot and I'd love some reviews on it. Actually when I first put up this story here, it was not completed yet and being a new member on inkitt, I did not know that the status of the story was displayed as completed!! So, almost everyone who has been reading my story sort of like vanished when I stopped updating for a while due to exams. Probably, they all thought that
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the story was completed but the last chapter then definitely did not seemed like an ending! But well...
I really hope that you guys will make my story rise up again like it once was..
I am really hoping to hear from you guys soon! Thank you!
Laura Heasley
Would you be interested in doing a swap for my book, "The Fire Seal"?
jray1977
Take one paragraph of you book, and find an inanimate object such as a car, table, phone etc. Now rewrite the paragraph from that item's viewpoint. How does it feel in that moment?
SherlockGnomes123
Challenge!!!
Write an autumn/fall themed meet cute (a scene in which the two people who will form a future romantic couple meet for the first time) !!
MyWorldOfPureImagination3
As i stepped off the subway the wind whipped at my face and manically tugged my hair, leaving tendrils streaming in every direction. commuters bobbed all around me under an ashen sky, as cold drops of rain began to spit from the ominous clouds. i
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weaved my way towards the kiosk, desperate for a coffee, when suddenly a sharp gust of wind whisked my scarf from around my neck. as i reached into the air to catch it, my hand caught someone else's and i found myself looking into rich, brown eyes, which held mine in a fierce gaze. a second later, the man brought my scarf down to rest on my should, and started off among the crowd.
jray1977
The crunch of the fall leaves did little to quiet the beating of Steven's heart as he hurried to the train platform. Three thirty. He has told her he would be there at three thirty. With less than twenty minutes to go, he practically jumped on board,
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nearly knocking over a little old man in the process. As he sat down and tried to calm his breathing, he gazed at the rose held tightly in his sweat hand. Two months of online chatting and countless text messages later, and he was finally going to meet Shelly in person. He closed his eyes and grinned like a fool. He had fawned over her pictures, practiced what he would say over and over again, and in fifteen minutes, she would be standing before him.
The door to the train slid open and Steven opened his eyes, realizing he hadn't even noticed they had stopped. He quickly stood and hurried out the door, up the stairs, and out on to the street. Their rendezvous was to be at a restaurant just a few blocks away, and with seven minutes to spare, Steven broke into a sprint. As he ran, the cool fall air hit his damp shirt and chilled him to the bone. He didn't care. Love was close. He was sure of it. With the marquee of Domingo's Cafe in sight, he slowed his pace, smoothed his slacks, and adjusted his collar. Just a few feet away. She said she would meet him right outside. And there, glancing nervously at her phone, she stood.
"Steven?" she asked quietly.
"I-I think so," he said.
Shelly giggled and looked at her feet. She was breathtaking.
Steven raised his hand to hand her the rose only to realize that he was no longer carrying it. He frantically looked on the ground around him, stammering the entire time.
"I brought you something, at least, I thought I had. I must have dropped it. I-I'm sorry."
"It's okay," Shelly said, placing a hand gently on his arm. "Shall we go inside?"
"Yeah, sure," Steven said with a sigh. As he opened the door for her, he felt a tug on his shirt.
"Ya dropped this, son," came a cranky voice from somewhere behind him. Steven turned around to see the old man he had almost collided with on the train. He was holding the rose.
"She's a beauty," the old man said. "And all beauties deserve a red rose."
Silver black
I have always loved fall .I know I usually when u ask people about their favourite season there is answer is anything but atumn. I like grounds covered with red and yellow leaves ,the awesome weather .And their is always a lot to paint .I love
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painting ,it's my life and actually ,I am currently paining right now sitting in the garden I have went sice I was born ,painting the beautiful scenery in front of me .I look up from my paining to observe people around me. Everyone looks so happy and there is peace all around .I was so engrossed in looking in front that I wasn't prepared for the unexpected force on my back that caused me to drop my paining and spoiling in in process .I turn to look at the culprit only to find pair most beautiful and intimidating green eyes .The eyes belonged to and equally handsome face and a god like body ."I am sorry ","huh?"I stuttered like an idiot at his apology ,to hypnotised by his deep voice that had my brain un functional ."I said I am sorry,I wasn't looking ,sorry about your painting "he repeated his apology ."It's okay ",I replied a little shakily .I was still in a daze ,I think .How can anyone be so beautiful ?"still I would like to make it up .So will a beautiful lady like yourself like to have a scream cone with me ? He then asked .My face heat up at his way of asking the question .Even though it wasn't needed ,I couldn't deny free ice cream .So smiling like kid at candy store ,I said yes .He ,too ,smiled showing his dimples.oh my good I think I might faint if I had take anymore ."Let's go right now ?" He offered.
Silver black
"Yeah' I know the perfect shop "I said picking up my painting material.
CottonCandySkies
The carpet of leaves gave off a scent Harmony would remember forever. The breeze caused her scarf to swirl around her, and she pulled her leather jacket tighter around her. She took a deep breath in, fall was her favourite season, the colours, the
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weather, the smell, all of it. She continued walking through the forest behind her house, smiling at the odd passerby. Suddenly, a large golden Labrador knocked into her, pulling her out of the serene cloud she had disappeared into. "I'm so sorry!" A man's voice said, and a hand reached down towards her. "Don't worry about it." She smiled, as she brushed herself off. Looking up, she blushed as she noticed his handsome green eyes that cut through her. "I'm Harmony." She offered. "Winn, sorry about Hephaestus, he isn't normally so taken with strangers." He smiled ruefully, mussing his hair. "It's fine," She said, giggling a little. They talked on the side of the path for a little longer, before exchanging numbers and heading their separate ways. Just before she left, Harmony turned and called out to Winn. "By the way I like your dog's name. God of fire, it's creative." She gave him an earth shattering smile and then walked away.
Ruenigami
Challenge!!!!
Write a haiku, about love!!
Remember the 5-7-5 rule!!!
Goodluck
pheonicorn
after saying hi , there is no saying goodbye, Ive fallen for you ( sorry for my bad writing)
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Silver black
SherlockGnomes123
nivsupremo
Ruenigami
Thanks, You dont mind if I use this for insparation. do you?(Btw, good job!!)
pheonicorn
I don't mind at all. it only took me a few minutes. Feel free to use it.
Silver black
your silence is accepted,cause your words did more harm ,atleast eyes speak truth
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pheonicorn
Silver black
dil_writes
Love, just out in the world, Precious, so wanted by all, But no one will give.
SherlockGnomes123
It crept up on me / when I least expected, like / the first day of spring
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