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Phindile Nqoko

Hey, I'm a new author and currently writing my first book, hope you guys like it and I'd appreciate your feedback.

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/625829

Roxas7500

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/547197

Heya, guys! "Chapter 24: Climax" & "Chapter 25: Loose Ends" for the final book in the Redemption Trilogy are now live! Feel free to give it a go over and let me know what you think; I'm always open to your opinions, as well as some R and R! Get excited as we draw to the close of the first Gatekeepers Trilogy and prepare to move onto the next! (On a side note, to anyone who's been playing attention to my posts, the chapter number IS correct. I

moved some chapters around between my books, so this current book has less chapters than my last post. Sorry for any confusion.)

The stage is set for an epic battle between two forces competing for the throne of the Dragon King, he who rules over the whole world in the shadows! Meanwhile, Draycos has been captured by the mastermind of recent events and is being used as a power source for his enemies! What will become of Draycos while he's kept in the belly of an ancient dragon? And will he ever find the Orb of the First King and prove his innocence? The first chapter of Draycos's otherworldly adventures draws to a close in the final book of the Redemption Trilogy!

Yiona771

Hey guys, I'm thinking of starting my own set of awards to give new authors a chance to shine :)

It's going to be like a mini writing contest, hosted by me.

Moment of truth, if all genres except other are accepted, will you join??

Or be a judge? :D

PS it has not started yet! I'm thinking of starting it somewhere in December :)

Yes? !!

Or No? :((

Anna Pearl !! I'd be a contestant :)

moi-moi @rosalind771 omg yes. i'd be happy with being both a contender or a judge, depending on what you need

Magnus_K I'd like to be a contestant, too.

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moi-moi

I'm interested in being someone's beta reader. In case you didn't know, a beta reader is a person who reads over your work before you publish it, and I can give you advice or push you in the right direction.

Bernenyon @moimoi_chan I would like for you to be my beta reader

Bernenyon I have published my first work that is Having His Baby And Love. It is ongoing but I would like for you to read it and tell me what you think about it

Bernenyon I am also open for review swaps

moi-moi @Bernenyon The pleasure is all mine.

D.L. Dreher @moimoi_chan I would love to have a beta reader for my work too! Would you be interested in my book, "Evo-lved Citizens?" It is ongoing, but the concept is all worked out and chapters are released regularly. Let me know what you think, and thanks for offering to do this for our writing community!

moi-moi @evo_lvedcitizens Sure no biggie! I find editing/beta-ing people's stories to be almost as exciting as writing my own.

Queenie Maud I'd be interested! I have an excerpt of my self-published work "Love, Mushroom Soup, and Murder" posted, or my newer work "Escaping the Quarantine"--I'm happy to return the favor at any time if you're interested!

Magnus_K I would appreciate it if you beta read my trilogy the Death Prediction Project. The first book is complete and the second is currently being uploaded. If you don't want to read the whole novel I was wondering if you could critique my new blurb (which ... See More

is below) and my old one which is in the first chapter of the novel and see if it's eyecatching enough. Genres: YA, Sci-fi, LGBTQ+ Piano prodigy, 17-year-old, Ryker Rathaway has claimed to hear music coming from people for as long as he can remember. His ability has made him an outcast among his family and peers. He’s gotten so used to his ability and adapted by wearing headphones and earplugs when in large crowds, or just avoiding them altogether. It throws him through a loop when he meets Porter, who is silent. He wonders why Porter is silent because to him silence normally means someone is dead.

16-year-old Porter Hollow, is the new kid, at Copper Cove Academy, in Blue Hill, Nebraska. One day, he hears someone playing the piano in one of the private music rooms. He follows the music and meets Ryker. Porter is entranced by Ryker’s playing. When Porter finds out about Ryker’s ability he doesn’t shun him like everyone else always has, he also wonders why he out of everyone Ryker has ever met is the only one who is silent.

Link to Book 1: <a href="https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/511455" target="_blank">https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/511455</a>

moi-moi @queeniemaud I'll review your newer work, and then your older one. If you read and comment (like or review) on my story, I would be really grateful.

moi-moi

@Magnus_K I'll review both of your books completely just understand that it might take few days, seeing as I have a list of other books to review too.

As for your blurb, I think you should delete this sentence, "He’s gotten so used to his ability

and adapted by wearing headphones and earplugs when in large crowds, or just avoiding them altogether." That can easily be explained through the actions of your character, and when it's in your summary I feel like it contradicts your next sentence. I also think you should cut out the entire second paragraph unless you plan on writing on both characters POV.

moi-moi Your new blurb should look like this: Ryker Rathaway is a 17-year-old piano prodigy who has claimed to hear music coming from people for as long as he can remember. So it really throws him in for a loop when he meets the new boy Porter Hollow, who is silent.

Magnus_K @moimoi_chan It is written from both POVs, is the second paragraph okay if this is the case?

Peace

Hey everyone!

I have recently uploaded a new novel named Water.

It is a campus love story.

I have also uploaded two more novels and there are many more projects in progress. I hope you can read my book.

moi-moi Would you mind doing a review swap?

Peace @moimoi_chan I am open for review swaps.

Sophie G @moimoi_chan yes I'd love to read your work ❤️

moi-moi @Peace0 Okay great ^^

Sophie G

Hi, please check out my continuous novels: The Thought of You Under the Sun. I'm looking for a head start on this story so I'd love it if you could dm me or leave a review. Thank you. xx

My profile: https://www.inkitt.com/sophie346

My insta is in my profile.

☀️☀️

Gloriana Addington

Anybody here intrested in doing a review swap. Please comment.

My book is "Golden love"

Golden Love https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/627791

Comment down below your title of the book

moi-moi @GloAddington I'd love to do a review swap, my book title is "Don't Smile at Me"

Gloriana Addington I am up for your offer. Please do check my book Golden love and do comment your opinion on its chapters.

Gloriana Addington

Hey guys I have posted my first book called "Golden Love" here. Please read. Story of a passionate love.

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/627791

Cynthia Williams is an 23 years old girl of Indian-American origin. A simple nerdy girl with only one aim in her life i.e. Getting Admission in Messachusste Institute of technology and getting her PhD done from there only. No sense of fashion, zero knowledge about entertainment world, No social life and a social awkward,these are some words one

can use to define her life.

Aiden James Martin, 26 years old, A world wide famous british Singer. Girls are dying for getting his just one like on Instagram or Twitter. A brilliant Singer,An aspiring actor and A best example of "How a celebrity should really behave ". At least that's what his every fan thinks. But every golden thing is not gold. And everything you see on your screens is not real. Celebrities too have secrets,have bad habits and hell of life.

A perfect prince charming, A secret playboy, A brilliant actor and singer, these are some words one can use to define Aiden.

What would happen when Science will collide with Music? It will make a new rythm which will be remembered for centuries. A rhythm of love,betrayal and pain. When an electron will dance on the rhythm of a song,it will create a new effect of Charms and sparkles in the universe.

Will Cynthia and Aiden's lovestory have happy ending? or Will it be turned into ashes when two different people with different set of mind will tie themselves in one knot of love? Question is Will their love survive? or it is destined to be ruin like other celeb affairs?

Roxas7500

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/547197

Heya, guys! "Chapter 23: Monster" for the final book in the Redemption Trilogy is now live! Feel free to give it a go over and let me know what you think; I'm always open to your opinions, as well as some R and R! (On a side note, to anyone who's been playing attention to my posts, the chapter number IS correct. I moved some chapters around between my books, so this current book has less chapters than my last post. Sorry for any confusion.)

The

stage is set for an epic battle between two forces competing for the throne of the Dragon King, he who rules over the whole world in the shadows! Meanwhile, Draycos has been captured by the mastermind of recent events and is being used as a power source for his enemies! What will become of Draycos while he's kept in the belly of an ancient dragon? And will he ever find the Orb of the First King and prove his innocence? The first chapter of Draycos's otherworldly adventures draws to a close in the final book of the Redemption Trilogy!

Yiona771 What's the first book called? :)

mattthomasauthor Hi! Would you like to do a review swap of my book, His Magnificence?

Roxas7500 @rosalind771 The first book is called Gatekeepers Book 1: Darkness. I hope you enjoy it!

Roxas7500 @mattthomasauthor I wouldn't mind doing a review swap, but keep in mind that this is the third book in a series. If you'd like to read the other two first, then be my guest. It's all up to you, though. I'll do my review for you once you've done mine.

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