Anyone willing to help me out with my book by giving reviews/critiques? It's an action/mystery book. Here's a short blurb:
Arella George was never meant to be a witch. She's just trying to survive as a college student, but life has other plans for her. With her parents back in her home country of Trinidad, she is completely alone in Toronto. However, after an accident, everything changes. Suddenly, Arella is able to see beings and things that she shouldn't. She can talk to people that are... See More
invisible to others.
While walking down the street, she is informed that her country, and the rest of the world, is in danger. Demons are slaughtering all of the obeah men, those who practice magic, and there's only one person that can stop them. Arella.
Can Arella put aside her disbelief and save her country's people before the world is overwhelmed by demons, or will this be the end of the world as we know it?
I'm not sure how to change/fix certain things that sound a bit weird, so any help you can give will be appreciated! Thank you!