Fantasy

anatons

Hello :) I just joined recently and decided to post my Nanowrimo2018 novel here:

http://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/253178



Title: The Time of Rain
Blurb:

""Time slips away quickly. Luckily for Rain, she holds her time in her hands…literally.
In the isolated town of Bast—where the sun never sets and where the natural flow of time has long been broken—fifteen-year-old Rain grows up in the midst of the enchanted woods, yearning to ... See More escape the borders and see a starry night. But when two opposing powers discover Rain’s ability, a choice has to be made…Rain’s freedom or her time?


Time is hers to wield, but the choice is not hers to make.


Who shall claim the time of Rain?""

It's a fantasy story, and I would love to know what others think about the story and my writing. I will gladly return the favor of course. Thanks in advance.

H. K. Collins

Leo: Between The Four Sons
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/adventure/167999

Benjamin Rosen

Looking for Steampunk!

You read right! I am interested in work in the steampunk genre and will gladly review your work . Leave a comment below with a compelling teaser and I will get to it when I can. Lets see what you guys got!

Cheers!

efflorescence

Hi everyone! I'm looking for readers to critique the first chapter of my novel, What the Morning Brings. I have more chapters in the works, but I'm writing this for NaNoWriMo so my first chapter is the only one that's polished and presentable. I'd also be up for review swaps if anyone's interested! <3

Ori is an average, boring boy. Or so he thought, until a mysterious circus appears in his backyard. He meets Blithe, a golden, glittery acrobat who immediately draws Ori in. So when ... See More she invites him to run away and join the Cirque de Reverie, how can he refuse?
Two sisters. Opposites. When one runs away, leaving the younger sister heartbroken, she must find a way to save her older sister before it's too late. But in a circus that thrives on magic, mystery, and manipulation, that task might just be monumental. Is Ori the key to solving the circus' secrets, or is he really just an ordinary boy?
https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/250336

haleyb03

Hi! My name is Haley. I joined this program a while ago, and posted a short story. However, I just uploaded the first chapter to a novel I started a few years ago. I am revamping it, and continuing it. I know the first chapter is short, but I really like where I stopped it. I am looking for some reviews, and loyal readers to keep me in line for updating. Thanks so much! I'm happy to be a part of this community! https://inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/250092?utm_source=shared_web

Avalon Greene

Hi!
I'm looking for some beta-readers for my story, "Secrets". It's a paranormal adventure romance thriller with a twist of time-travel, Only a few chapters are up so far, but I'd like to get some constructive feedback on it. Here's the link- https://www.inkitt.com/stories/adventure/220878.
Thanks and have a nice day!

YoungSamSong

Hello everyone! I'm currently working on my second book: War Maiden 2. During NaNoWriMo 2018, I will upload it chapter by chapter as I write. Given this, it will be of first draft quality.

If you are interested, check it out!

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/249264

Laura Heasley

Hello,
my novel is a fantasy/romance called, "The Fire Seal". I would love it if you could review it, and please vote for it if you enjoy it!
High school has always been a chance for people to grow and change. After sixteen years of being normal, Dialla Matthews, she goes through a different type of change--one that involves marks embedded in her skin, using magic and defending herself against Extended, an evil syndicate of sorcerers convinced they are superior to normal humans. ... See More Just yesterday, she was focusing on her makeup skills and boys. Now, she has to learn to control her magic before it kills her. While those are skills she can develop with practice, there's one thing she has to control on her own, one thing no amount of teaching can help her with...a forbidden, though requited romance.

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/189373

Thanks!

Avalon Greene

Hi!
I'm looking for some beta-readers for my story, "Secrets". It's a paranormal romance adventure thriller story with a twist of time-travel, Only a few chapters are up so far, but I'd like to get some constructive feedback on it. Here's the link- https://www.inkitt.com/stories/adventure/220878.
Thanks and have a nice day!

Avalon Greene

Hi!
I'm looking for some beta-readers for my story, "Secrets". It's a paranormal adventure story with a twist of time-travel, Only a few chapters are up so far, but I'd like to get some constructive feedback on it. Here's the link- https://www.inkitt.com/stories/adventure/220878.
Thanks and have a nice day!