I am new to Inkitt and would love some feedback and reviews on my completed story, its called Forbidden Forest! Eleanor has to go in to the forest to save her prince, but what happens when she meets the Evil King and has to battle her way through his mystical, dark forest, will she save her prince, or lose herself along the way?
If anyone is doing Camp NaNo in July, and is still struggling with inspiration, @IndiePenInk is tweeting #AbandonedIdeas all week leading up to camp next Sat. On the flip side, if you are flush with ideas you know you'll never get around to writing, and want to see them go to a good home, you can tweet them to @IndiePenInk with the same hashtag. good luck with Camp!
Some families have a few skeletons in their closets. Others have a whole graveyard.
At least, that's what thirteen-year-old Demi orphan Hajime thinks after his fire-wielding best friend Raiden returns to the Demi realm. If the Larter family's leaving six years ago isn't a mystery in itself, then Raiden's older brother being tagged a dangerous fugitive might be. That – or the fact that Raiden has absolutely no memory of their world at all.
While plunging deeper into ... See More Raiden's family secrets, Hajime starts to wonder more about his own. So when offered the chance to find his birthparents in exchange for helping Raiden find his wayward brother, he can’t seem to refuse.
But what starts as a harmless quest to find Raiden's brother and Hajime's parents takes a sudden, life-threatening turn – because the Demi realm's most dangerous criminal is after those same people too.
Hi, everyone. Angela here.
I'm an avid reader of Fantasy/YA novels. Maybe so avid that I ended up writing one myself.
Could really use some reviews since this is my first book on here. I'm also pretty serious about getting my book up for publishing, so I'd love if any fellow YA/Fantasy readers could give the book a read and tell me what they think.
If the book seems interesting to you and you'd like to help me out, check it out here: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/135135?utm_source=shared_web
Greetings, all of you. I'd like to share the first story in a series I have planned: The White King.
It's very difficult to summarize the story without spoiling a lot, I'm afraid, and the closest I've gotten goes as follows.
"The world might not be in turmoil yet, but a sense of unease lingers throughout Kosmos as Donn Sionnach, Schwarz Himmel, Octanus Clair, and Nua Maidin learn more about the issues plaguing their society.
Like The White King, a man leading a ... See More seemingly limitless army of gigantic armored creatures- some monster, some animal, but all of them deadly.
Despite the first impression of a benevolent dictator, they gain a glimpse of his secret activities and set out to correct them."
I would love some feedback on my progress, even if the book is a work in progress as fixing a mistake or improving your core design earlier makes your work all the better.
Thanks in advance.
Penelope Hennessey is a vampire hunter, misguided by her counsellor who taught her how to hunt. Now, doubting the path she's taken. She wishes to change...
I would love to hear some reviews/feedback on Penelope - The Hunter Series.
The Mermaid's Tale is a children's of little Akua a slave girl who grows up to be a pirate Captain and her companion Hasani the mermaid I have had one review so far of 5 stars and would love to see what this group thought...
it is an adventure which has its fair share of deception and disguise, foiling a kidnap, stealing a treasure map and a brush with the king of England. There is a good helping of love and friendship and baddies getting what they deserve. It is now ... See More almost thirty years since Akua first arrived, but on land, Akua would be closer to eighty-five. The Mermaid knows that if Akua remains living in the sea even a minute after the midnight on her thirtieth ocean year, her actual age would consume her all at once. Together they plan to make Akua a Pirate Captain so that she can be buried at sea when she dies and return to Hasani for a Mermaid Forever. Akua agrees to go ashore but her heart hardens with grief at being separated from Hasani and she begins to erase The Mermaid from her memory. Hasani has no choice but to give up her mermaid essence, to find Akua and bring her back to the sea. Trouble is, mermaids who give up their mermaid essence willingly;
become unrecognisable beyond the ocean, even to the people they love.
thank you for your eyes! happy to read /review etc and good luck with all your stuff
Hi everyone, I would like to share my fantasy novel "The Guardians of Xegarath," an amazing fantasy story with demons, angels, dragons, gods, the mighty wolfxeg, and mushroom people! I have over 100 copies left, and I previously had a four star rating from international best selling author Greg Reid and fans like Frank Shankwitz founder of Make a Wish Foundation! Thanks so much for your time, and happy reading/writing/or both? :)
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Hello everyone, my name is Samih, I have written a short story, and would love for you to give it a read. The title of the story is, A Silver Lining. Read and let me know what you think."
If you like traditional Epic Fantasy or Sword and Sorcery, then perhaps "Stolen" is for you. I would love to know what you think. :)
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