Vanessa Hawk

Hello all🙂 I'm just a writer, daughter, girlfriend, and university student who majors in Bio Lab Science and has a creative writing certificate. I love writing and I hope you love reading it❤

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Amazing

One of the best books I have ever read, and i have read a lot. I cried at least twice while reading this and I hardy ever get emotional about books. This story was well written, thought out, and over all a great read. I loved the length of it and as much as my poor little heart hated it, I loved that Blaine didn't just give in. Thats what made this story full of so much emotion. The struggle he had and the way he gave her up even when he didn't want to because he thought it was best for her really showed how much he cared. It made me mad sometimes because I dont think I could have written it like that. I would have been too impatient for them to be together, so I admire the authors resilience in that way. Love, love, love this so much. I could, and probably will read it again.

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Great work

The beginning of this story really caught my attention. It starts off on a really bad note, and when you think it might get better, it gets worse, but that is the best thing about this book. Ups and downs are what keep people coming back, I know I definitely have.

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Loving it

I actually really love this. I could be wrong, but Brax seems like he has a softer side of him that he's afraid to let show since he's all about being a dom. But i also think he's actually starting to care about her a little since he worries about having overreacted. I feel bad for her but I also think subconsciously she enjoys it which is why she hasn't run away. Less out of fear more because she kind of doesn't really want to leave.

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Hot and steamy

I really enjoyed it. I actually like the ending a lot. I so wish there was some indication Tony was into him since before but didn't act on it because he was too young, it would fill a plot hole as its so random that Tony just fucks him out of the blue. But i did like it a lot and I think the description of everything that was going on was well done.

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