G. S. Pier

Osby

"There is no exquisite beauty... without some strangeness in the proportion." - Edgar Allan Poe

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Brilliant!

This story is incredible! To me it reads like a proper published novel. I often find sci-fi a bit too techy, but your language is descriptive and I can easily picture the characters and environments. Which are great by the way. The plot is amazing, and despite the beginning of the story being a bit overwhelming with all the details, I found it easy and enjoyable to read. I hope you write more because I firmly believe the world needs more stories like this. Well done!

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A great start!

I really enjoyed the plot and the characters! They could have been cliché but you manage to write them like new. The story feels well-paced, though it is hard to tell since it is an on going project. But you have written a solid start, and it will be interesting to see where it goes from here. I hope you update the story soon!

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Well done!

I've only read the first two chapters so far. Like someone else pointed out, the paragraphs and chapters are quite long. It's not in itself a bad thing, it's just that I don't have my glasses and it overly strain my eyes.

The story itself is really good and quite different. You have an interesting concept here and a solid plot. I am looking forward to reading the rest of it once I have my glasses. :)

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Well done!

The fact that the story start at chapter 26 is slightly confusing, but other than that it's a good story. I like your style of writing and the way that you managed to grab my attention right from the start. I hope you continue to write and share your stories.

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I love this story!

The plot and characters are excellent, and you describe everything vividly and beautiful. I found myself reading the whole thing through and being left wanting more. Brimstone is absolutely addictive and I can't wait to see what you will come up with next.. :D

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A charming tale

Horror is always tricky, because what one fear another don't. Personally, I didn't find this story very scary. Rather it reminded me of old folk tales, like the story about the Pied Piper and Grimm fairy tales. Which I found fun and even sweet. The language, grammar and such could be improved, but overall this story makes for a charming read. Well done and keep up the good work!

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Oh my!

I normally don't go for romance, but this story was really good. The characters and the plot were interesting and felt original. The writing captured me and held me spellbound from the first word to the last. All in all, I thought this story was lovely and has so much potential. I hope you post more of it!

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Well done!

The spelling and grammar leaves a lot to be desired, but you can tell that the writer is passionate about his/her story and that goes a long way. As for the plot, I found it interesting and the characters quite likable. It's very classic fantasy without being high fantasy.

My advise to the writer would be to check the spelling and grammar a bit more closely, and to keep up the good work. :)

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Delicious!

Deliciously naughty with intense and interesting characters, this story is set in one of my favourite genres, and so far I haven't been disappointed. The story makes for a really good read, and you quickly get hooked to it. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and please update soon!

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A very nice beginning!

Like the title says, you have gotten off to a nice start. The *chuckles* and *sigh* throws me a bit. It may simply be a style of writing I'm not familiar with, but to me it made the story feel not was richly written as it could have been.

As for the plot, with only two chapters up, I can't say that much about it, but I do love stories about people ending up in fantasy worlds. I really hope you continue updating the story because I would love to see what happens next.

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Great story!

You write well. Your descriptions are really good and the overall plot is interesting. There are some things that feels a little sketchy. Like the main character's past. You give hints but doesn't go into details. It feels like there is a part one that I should have read. But all in all, it's a good story. I hope you write more.

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Really, really good!

The story captured me right from the start and it had a nice flow to it. I really like the characters and the plot. My only complain is that there isn't more of it. I hope you write more because I want to read it.

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Poetic

This reads more like poetry than fiction. I found it made for an interesting read. I hope you write more.

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An interesting start

This feels like it could be the start of a story rather than a story in itself, and I for one am interested in seeing where you take it. I hope you continue writing. Your writing style has a nice flow but your sentences can be a bit too long. It's something I am working on myself. :) But all in all, you did really good and I hope you keep writing.

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