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Like The Plot
I like the idea of what your "slave" ends up coming to be and how you have a supposed transition for her plot. I however can't grasp an interest in the way you write out the events, as at some times it seems first person but at others third person. Also, you really need to work on your grammar or find some people who will aid you with fixing it.Read the story now
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