First 4 Chapters Reviw
Read the story now
(+) The Descriptions
The descriptions and action scenes were pretty good. I liked that they were a bit nitty & gritty. So good job there.
(+) The Blurb
You did a good job on enticing readers to begin the story.
(-) The Cover
For me, the cover is a bit plain and doesn't really show what the book is about. Despite the old saying "Don't Judge A Book By It's Cover", people do. With this cover, your book would be passed up. I recommend editing a premade or getting one specifically made for you.
(-) The Grammar
The grammar needs some work as it really detracts from the reading. You use << >> in place of quotations, which is odd and it really made me do a double take. I know you mentioned to not worry about those, but I do believe removing those would really make your story 100x better. Also, make sure to run your chapters through a grammar checker, it will really help round things out.