Haize_JKing

An aspiring writer and artist who loves reading, writing and all things creative.

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The Heart Of The Ocean

First of all love the cover and the title of not only the book but the chapters as well. Your story draws in the reader from the first chapter and you use a good amount of descriptive language that helps the reader imagine the scene before them. Keep up the great work!!

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Five Words

I was immediately intrigued by the summary. Once I read it I couldn't help but find myself curious about what those five words were. Within the story you use some light imagery but using more can help enhance the quality. Although, despite that everything else great. Keep up the great work!!

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The Last Shifter Alive

This book has an interesting plot although the first chapter could do with a little work, so that it can capture the readers attention. Despite this, I like the idea behind the book and I love where this book is heading. Focusing more on imagery and building not only your characters but also the world they live in, will help improve and showcase your amazing ideas. Keep up the great work!!

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Secret Blood

An interesting story plot written with beautiful imagery. By the first chapter the reader is already captivated by the appealing writing style of the author. This book is amazing so far! I can't wait to read more.

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