Haji M.

Loves reading fantasy novels and short stories.

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Good story

I enjoyed and learnt useful things from your story. Thank you.

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Awesome storytelling

A fantastic tale with engaging characters and complex plots. Great imagination throughout the chapters whilst kindling the emotions with the dialogue and interactions of the characters. The author seamlessly changes from one plot sequence to the next whilst driving the story forward at a great pace, which is not an easy thing. (You don’t need tips from me regarding building tension; you have it in bucketloads already; great job! Looking forward to reading more)

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Movie potential

Fun to read with memorable characters. Would suit reading beside the pool on a sun holiday! Great editing work. Complex enough storyline to make a fantastic romcom movie.

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Very interesting

Very interesting concept and story line, bringing together Medieval Scottish folklore with modern times. Engaging characters with frequent plot twists. Well done.

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Awesome magical fantasy

Interesting twist with Bloodfeather in the mix. Great ending, look forward to book 2.

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Great intro

Terrifying start (in a good way). Nice flow of words with vivid descriptions evoking strong emotions. Great job.

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Like reality

Raw emotions flying throughout the pages. Interesting story so far which is fast paced. Looking forward to reading more.

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Great story

Great story line with remarkable imagination! Memorable characters to root for. Fantastic, highly descriptive battle scenes which I enjoyed. Very well done!

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Great so far

High sense of tension and drama throughout the pages, with memorable characters and a great storyline. Very well done!

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