Monique11211

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Loved it

I am really enjoying getting to see the characters grow. I would love to see how the parents would react to Hunters new life, and some insight of Alex's life. I do like the way things are going, but I think it would have been better to given more backstory from other characters POV. Next story, I would try to make it seem more planned and concluded. This ending felt a little rushed.

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