Hamza_Pervez

You Can't save the World alone

I know you are reading this, I am an enthusiastic author on Inkitt and am writing Horror, Mystery and Thriller stories for readers to read something different and original. Night Terrors!

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Unbelievable!

I read the summary and the summary itself was so attractive. I couldn't hold back, so I started reading it and I was impressed! The thing I like the most about this book is the PLOT. The plot of this book is so absorbing that no-one could resist reading it. I personally like to read action and thriller books, and this is my favorite. I couldn't see any major punctuation or grammatical mistakes, which would make it easy for the reader to read the book. Although it's not complete, it's still very outstanding and I hope that it would win in the INKITT'S MIDSUMMER MYSTERY WRITING CONTEST. Kudos! to the author.

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Outstanding book!

I think that the best feature about it was the plot. It was so well-described and it could easily make the reader blend into the story. The character development and dialogues were all so good. There aren't any major grammatical mistakes in this book, which makes it easy to read. Kudos! to the author.

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Staggering Story!

I absolutely loved the Plot of the story, it was better than the other books of this genre. I really liked the dialogue writing style of the author, It was making the reading absorbed in the story. Although this is the second book by this author, but it's sooo awesome! The first is also just as good as this one, so you should read it too! The Grammar and Punctuation was also perfect, although just 2-3 times, I spotted some minor punctuation mistakes, Overall the book was really good! I recommend you to read it, I hope your upcoming books are also amazing as this one and that your books are successful. Prestige for the author!

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Absolutely Outstanding!

I read your book thoroughly and found it really amazing, I have read a lot of books of Drama and Humor, but this one is nothing like the others, it was absolutely Outstanding. I really liked the writing style of the author and the Grammar as well. I really like the 5th Chapter. The chapters were long, which would make anyone want to read more. I also liked other books by the same author. These books deserve a lot more success and I hope to see them as a fully published novel. Thanks!

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Awesome Writing Skills!

This book is so awesome. All chapters are equally interesting and well-written. I am quite impressed by the writing style of the book. To be honest, this book is so good, because of the author's writing skills. The author has amazing ability to write books and give each and every detail to each scene. The Plot is outstanding as well. Overall, it's a really nice and impressive book! Thanks!

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This book is outright AWESOME!

First of all, This book's plot is so amazingly planned that any reader would wanna read it and that was the case with me. I read this book, because of it's plot. Then, comes the writing style, The writing style of the author is also making this book really understandable, so you can easy blend into the story and imagine as if it's happening to you. This is the main characteristic a good and reader-engaging book has. I think that you should write more stories, because your writing style will definitely make you popular. Thanks!

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Such an Awesome book!

Basically, this is the best Mystery book I've read after a really long time. The way the author wrote it is so understandable and easy to read. Waiting for more new and interesting chapters!

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Absolutely Awesome!

From the start, I've been hooked up to this story. It's plot is soo interesting. The thing I liked most in it was the character development and the dialogue delivery, The characters and the plot combined made me blend into the story. Unbelievable! The grammar and paragraphing is also well and this will make it easy for anyone to read this book. I really appreciate the author, because I've seen really less books of this genre on Inkitt that are soo good and absorbing! In the last I would encourage the author to keep writing these type of stories, although this one isn't finished yet. It's still pretty interesting to read. Kudos! to the author!

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Everything Amazing!

From the sweet start to the elated ending, just everything in this book was outstanding!!! I was hooked up till the last chapter. First thing's first, I really liked the plot. The Plot is the main part of a book and if it's good combined with an artistic writing style, a book is always awesome and TRIP GONE WRONG had it all It made the reader blend into the story. The storyline and character development was well-planned. The dialogue delivery was also just like a professional author. I have read other books by Nashra_Pervez, but this is the best. I hope it will gain more success in the upcoming future. Kudos! to the author!

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Outstanding Story!

I absolutely loved the story from the start till the end, It is one of the best Mystery books, I have ever read. It looks just like a professionally published book. I really enjoyed the plot as well, which was great according to a thriller Novel. I was also impressed by the length of the chapters, It made the reader blend into the story, so that the reader can imagine it in His/Her mind, I had the same feeling! I read this book as if I was watching a movie, It would look more amazing if it were a movie. I recommend you that you keep writing more stories, I wish this book to be more successful in the future. I would suggest you that "forward your book on different platforms to get more read and reviews!" Thanks! and Remember "A Book is an Infinite Universe of Creativity"

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Very Nice Overall

This book is outright awesome. I really like this book. The plot is well set and even the character development is amazing. The dialogue delivery is like... WOW! I am looking forward that the author writes more books like this one, so that they can be one of the trending stories on INKITT. Thanks! 😇

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Such a mind blowing Suspenseful story!

This is the best suspense story I've read. I really like the way the author joins the plot and the way all dialogues are delivered. It looks just like a professional published famous book. I think you should write more stories like this. The Episode 10 is really sad, when she is told that she has Brain cancer and can't live for more than 3months or 1 year. Awesome book!

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A Detailed and Impressive story!

I took some time and read this book thoroughly and then, I decided to give a review. It's such an awesome book. It's so detailed and elaborated that a reader would easily blend into the story. The Plot was really well-planned, along with the character development, which was incredible. I think you should write more stories and if you do, they are gonna be one of the trending stories on inkitt. Although, I think that now, you should write Fantasy and action stories. You should also share your story as much as you can, because it's such an awesome story that every reader would wanna read it! Overall, this book was Superb!

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A FANTASTIC story!

This is the book that I've been looking for all over Inkitt. I've been looking for books with pure fantasy, so I found this book. It is such a fantastic book. I love the writing style of the author, which makes it really easy and comfortable to read. Thanks!

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Amazing story!

I really like this story. I have been finding a good story on inkitt, which is about family struggle and I just found one! "Family Day" is the best book I've read yet on inkitt. The writing style and storyline is awesome! I honestly think that this book deserves more success!

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Best Book !

I have given 5 stars in all the categories, because I think that the Plot and Writing style actually deserves it! The whole story layout is outright amazing! best book!

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Great Storyline!

Hi, I've just started reading your book and I honestly love the storyline. I've rated you full on the plot because this type of story is mostly hard to write. I'm glad I gave this book a read! Good luck :)

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This Story is Outright Awesome!!!

This story is soooo Amazing! I am surprised by the impressive writing style and the Plot. I've never read this type of story before. OUTSTANDING!

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Absolutely Fabulous!

This story from the beginning to the end is just FABULOUS!!! I've never read such an intriguing and absorbing story on Inkitt before. I would like to appreciate the author for writing such an awesome story. I was especially astounded because of the Plot and Character development. The characters that are created are also so realistic and the dialogues are also really understandable. I think if you write more stories, they will be one of the trending stories on Inkitt. So, you should work hard and continue writing awesome and surprising stories that will be famous worldwide. 😇

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Awesome Plot and Storyline

This book is so awesome. I personally love horror stories, but this one is a true combo, It is a Horror/Mystery/Thriller. So, if you are not a big horror fan, you can enjoy it's Mystery and Thriller Genre. Amazing!

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