Hannah Laine

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Great Beginning!

The story starts out really well!!

My only criticism is that i wish you would not say flashback or present day. Maybe if you italicized the flash back or something it would make it clear to the reader that it happened at a different time.

can’t wait to finish reading! great story :)

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This book is a breath of fresh air

OMG!! This book is amazing! The writing style is well developed!! I have gotten so use to reading books with less than okay writing and great story lines, this one has the best of both! I could keep reading this all day!!!

Amazing description and an even more amazing story! 10/10 would recommend!!!

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Great Story Line

I have only read the first few chapters and already am hooked on the story.

It reads almost like a comic book or a tv show is playing in your head.
Great fantasy novel and amazing plot! :)

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Interesting Plot!

The only negative I could find was I really wish the author would use more description of the environment rather than just telling us the information out right.

Other than that, it is a really interesting story. And the romance genre aspect is very prevalent in only the first few chapters.

If a romance mystery book is what you are looking for then this is the book for you.

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Great Book

The sorry idea and plot are great! the description is awesome too! Great Fantasy book! Please keep writing :)

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