Henk van Ommen

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gripping

Gripping story, quite nicely done.
The end was a bit abrupt and unfulfilled though, demanding a sequel. I dis like the way the characters did push each other away, and still got drawn to each other.

maybe some more humor would make it the success it deserves.

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