Henry Charlebois

St.Petersburg, Florida, U.S.A.

I love writing horror stories. And Max Brooks (Author of World War Z) is the reason why I found a love for reading and writing. His books always have me hooked for start to finish.

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This is my kind of story

This was so amazing! I love how it has a little plot from the detail given, to make it seem like a big plot!

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Smile your on camera...lol

This is such a compelling plot! You have me hooked from the summary. But just to help you I noticed that grammar and writing styles were a bit odd just so you can fix it I would recommend reading the story over again. But overall great story I cant wait to read more of this!!! You got me hooked to it bro! You're a very talented author when it comes to writing horror stories! By the way I would love if you checked out my story The Fallen War: Nuclear Warfare! Please I would love to do a review swap!!!!

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Good Writer

Dear author you have a really strong skill of detail with the gore and murder. I love it so far. You must keep writing this its really amazing. I love the plot its so "Heart Juicy" LOL But seriously though I love it and can't wait for more. The story had me totally hooked from when I saw in the summary that it wants you to discover on your own who the killer is. I love stories like that. Keep going and never give up
My favorite part of the story is the Killers point of view

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Bonnie

So, I have to say I liked it. But everything was just so crazy. It had great action. But I would say work a little bit more on the atmosphere. Like you see sure there was the dark stormy night and unoriginal stuff like that that we all use but I just couldn't feel the fear. Maybe instead of saying a dark cloudy sky try like. "The clouds were a dark grey like smoke from a fire pit" Or I don't know something like that.
But over all I really enjoyed it. The story had great action and detail in the blood and gore. It was amazing I loved the plot to it. I really thought it was going to be like a Scream movie because of the whole argument between them. I thought Rex was actually going to be like Ghostface but he didn't. And I got to say Scream is probably one of the worst horror movies I've ever watched. My favorite series is the Halloween one with Michael Myers. But overall I LOVED IT!!!

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Dear author

I have to say I love the fact that is takes you on a journey through a extremely amazing fantasy world. I loved the creativity and imagination that was put into this. But there is one thing I have to say, you kinda jumped between timelines. Like the queen was a few cycles old and then she got even older in the next paragraph. There wasnt much detail with the wars going on but it was still fantastic

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Strong Writing

I love the story. It really had me attached to the murder. Strong detail and how you describe things. There is one negative though...why didn't you write more? I really enjoyed it and I would love to see this be turned into a novel.

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