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Emotional Rollercoaster

Every turn with these two, I’m crying. Ending was not what I expected but it was great nonetheless and didn’t disappoint

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Falling in Love

Falling in love has never sounded so beautiful on page. I literally cried when Josh was trying to profess his love and she rejected him at first. I’m so glad that they made it out. This made my weekend so much more beautiful

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Conversations Are key

I think the one thing that mainly falls short in most books is dialogue. It doesn’t follow the current scene and it may be lacking BUT your dialogue scenes between the characters (especially Halie and Moi) were very well done. I found it endearing, almost 🥰.

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Surprisingly Heart-Stopping

So far, the basics are covered and I’m truly pulled into everything from Ashton’s POV. It’s still a gripping read and with a little more work and outline, it has true potential to do greater. Cheers 🥰

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Devastatingly Sweet

Second chances do happen and when it comes, its heart-wrenchingly sweet, adorable and fulfilling

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Calculating & Adorable

Sometimes love never points us straight. Sometimes we've got to meet the worst to find our best.. Both characters formed an unbreakable pair bond that later manifested into something more. The pacing was great, the plot was simple yet captivating, and the emotional feedback hit me so strongly that it impossible not to hope for a happy ending.
Great work!

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Sucker for Emotion

Making an emotional connection with characters on a page is never easy, showing their pain and their motivations. Chapter 18 and 23 will forever be etched into me, showing me how vulnerable one can be and how deep they have to love someone to show the cracks in their armor. Paul turned the whole show around and I loved it. His growth and change was beautiful, transforming into his own butterfly.

Keep blessing us with your big heart!
Cheers

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Great Yet Simple

Separate from all the cliché romance tropes present here, it was still a fun and exciting read. I wish I could say more but even though it was a good read, it was still lacking. I wasn't attached or emotionally invested due to the quick pacing and barely there emotional connection. If you have this labelled as Erotica then I totally understand the book from a different perspective. The sex scene were amazingly descriptive and the well written. Overall, not a bad run. I have faith in your reading still and I know you have a talent like none other.
Cheers!

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Riveting, Different & Overall Immaculate

I don't know if words can begin to express how much of a treasure this book is. The plot was interesting and easy to follow, using each numbered book instruction as a way for Tank and Kate to grow. The emotional tension and connection, built purely from a need for human contact and survival. The need for trust and understanding on a complete higher level, even in a post apocalyptic world.
Amazing Work! Honestly, I've read this a million times, even lost the book at one point and now I found it again.

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Fascinatingly Pure

I love the chemistry, the constant character growth between Max and Spring. Initially, I was worried from the beginning that this would be a mess but was surprised toward the end that I had to take back my previous statement. Learning to love and trust isn't a walk in the park and you truly portrayed that here. This was fine read and I hope to read more of your beautifully paced work!

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Emotions & More Emotions

Violet was right to protect her heart. She was right to keep everyone at a distance and be prepared for the worst. But I think sometimes when our hearts are destroyed by a man, it takes another man to fix it. Another man who is genuine and makes you want to live again. This was honestly written, and I feel like it hit close to home for the author because the emotions projected were so raw and unhindered but if it isn't then this is just a true testament to how touching her writing is. This was great. This was everything I DIDN'T expect it to be and it blew me away.

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Emotional and Riveting

I'm not really a fan of BL or BXB but when I found this book, I came with an open mind. I saw a human, just itching for pure, honest love and another who wanted someone to understand his struggles. These two found comfort in each other, despite age being just a number, and I found myself laughing with them, crying with them...Thank you for writing this. I'll probably never pick up another boo like this but while I'm here I have to let everyone know how powerful the message here is and that it can't be ignored.
Amazing work!

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Beautifully Heart-Wrenching

The growth of Rage and Iris can never be matched. What was once a fleeting emotion has grown into something so strong that even a demon himself, can understand what it means to love and protect. I stand by this book and I hope to never let it go. I hope they make this into a movie, just like Harry Potter because I believe you have a gift in your soul that shines brighter than any flame.

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Immaculately Refreshing

I will always love the chapter that shows us Aviana's image of peace, seeing Gunner's blue eyes i her dreams and then runs into him in the hallway after she wakes up. That scene is burned into my mind and I have not been able to part from it. What you've written here and the ability you have, is allowing the reader to fully comprehend the whirlwind of emotions and importance of these characters so they can bond with your book. I found the steady changes to be funny and refreshing and also the growth of each character. I loved it. I love it.

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Surprisingly Adequate

I don't really have a preference for books that entertain turmoil and abuse but I found this read eye opening and beautiful. Watching Gabrielle mold to fit the man that barged into her life and painfully hold herself together shows how strong and understanding she was.
Sometimes a relationship may be toxic but the pair bond allows us to know what the other needs, even if its against better judgement. I shuddered through the gory bits but the understanding and love that blossomed in the end shone over all that.

Thanks for this interesting read!

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True Love for One's Self

I admired the writing style of this first book as well as the second. I haven't completely finished it (and I may not) because I don't really like the repeated expressions of self doubt and self pity. It was very essential to the plot and strengthened the point to show the issues and the extent to which one can suffer (so its a personal preference to not indulge in these kind of books). Otherwise, it's beautifully written.

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Midnight Flame

I LOVED this book. Marcus's character held so much authority and he controlled situations so fluidly and gracefully, that I fell in love with him too. Eloise is also very strong in her own way and outshines the familiar weak feminine trope. I truly appreciate the plot and how it was handled.
Everything was beautiful, just beautiful!

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Surprisingly Adequate

I don’t really get into BL but I found this refreshing and adorable. Having your soulmates back is extremely top priority despite gender, even in the real world and handling other controversial topics along the way does also give it a real work setting. I appreciated this short love vibe. Thank you!

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Worthy Multiple Re-Readings

Honestly, I’ve never read anything more intense. Every scene is almost written as if it’s a delicate piece of art, just waiting for the reader to decide how they feel about it. Truly, I wish there was more of a buildup with more chapters than just diving in, but having already diving it, it does show some true aspect of life that sometimes when we fall in love, we fall hard and fast, without logic or reason. Some are better physically talking things out than with words and emotions. I respect the creative choice and I stand by it as well. Awesome. Cheers all round

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A Slice of Life

I don’t know how to express this. When I started reading this, I wondered why John was in focus. Then Rodney came. I partially wanted this to be an awakening romance but eventually I accepted that this is someone who is trying to build their future and build themselves. I was truly touched on a level I didn’t even know was possible. I’ll go back to my trashy romance books before I start crying. Thank you!

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Best thing since Trump

Amazingly Super, short and sweet

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Amazingly Endearing

I loved the originality, the funny banter, the emotional sweetness. Really gave me a run for my money

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