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Wow

The storyline was perfect, the characters were perfect, everything was just amazing about this book. I Genuinely got so happy over Sara and Clare being together and so genuinely sad over Pari's death. I cried!
That's what a good author must do, is get the reader sucked into the story enough so that they feel the joy the characters feel, the hate they feel, or the grief they feel. I Don't doubt you could make a lot of money off of this book. It's truly amazing and now i want to see a movie 'Fantasy Justice'. I'd watch that in a heartbeat!
can't wait for more chapters!

-Hiro

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One of the best Greek mythology books ive seen on here!

The characters and their stories just flow together so well and you have a way of just getting in, getting out, and leaving the reader wanting more of your work. Truly an amazing story, i wish it was finished. Hopefully you do finish it! I think it has some potential to get published, even. I loved how you made Rosegold not this perfect flawless character and gave her so many obstacles to overcome. Me personally, i love your writing style. Please continue! Now, if you'll excuse me, i'm going to see if theres anymore works of yours as amazing as this one was.
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This story is truly amazing in every aspect, i am saddened it's over. The characters and their stories work together so well, it's really a good book. I'm sure it would do very well if you were able to publish this. It's This is a short review but it is really amazing. There were no plotholes that i could see and i love that. Keep writing, you're amazing!

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