HJ Furl

London

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Finish First, Then Post!

I really enjoyed the blank canvas style, the intrigue you painted in your introductory chapter - just check the wording to ensure your writing flows. We all get "writers block" (tell me about it!), starting something novel with a blinding flash of inspiration. The worst feeling in the world is that "day after the night before feeling" - when you come back to Earth, and routine. My advice to you is take a break then come back to it when you're re-energized - you'll be amazed at what you can create. Your story has great potential, you do - so don't post something with an afterthought added indicating you might not finish. You deserve recognition, success - give us your full story to read - when you're ready and not before!

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Sparring Partners with a Punch!

I really enjoyed the three chapters I read. Elise is a highly competent writer whose plot and characters draw you in. I was gripped from the outset. The story ebbed and flowed well and I felt I was there. There is explicit sex of the blunt kind - but that made it all the more real, easier to envisage, and well, it was hot - not my style of erotica but I loved it. I enjoyed the build-up, the intensity of the story, the aftermath and the realism you brought to the story. Word of advice: you're a great writer - be strong and stop criticizing your work in notes to the reader - your much too good ti do that! Let the reader decide - and know what, Elise - your reader enjoyed it.

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