Zoe Dunn

I specialize in artful misdirection and unexpected plot twists, weaving stories where love thrives amidst shadows and uncertainty. Join me on a journey where passion conquers fear.

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I need more!

The first chapter did a great job of keeping me interested. I feel really invested in finding out what Maneli needs a cure for. Making their magic abilities unique to their pack is also an intriguing twist. I have so many questions! Is the king going to be her mate? Where did her mother's locket come from? This has me hooked and I need more now! There were some minor editing issues throughout (grammar, spelling, possibly word choice, but that could be due to differing dialects), but they didn't detract from the story at all. Very few stories actually keep me captivated enough to not feel jarred out of them over the editing issues. All in all, great read and I can't wait to see more!

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Intrigued

Overall the story is very interesting and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. It could use some editing as the tense seems to vary a bit and took me out of the story in a few places, but I think with a little bit of polishing up it can give some of even the most seasoned writers a run for their money. Would definitely recommend it and I can't wait to see how it turns out after undergoing the editing process!

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Has Promise

The plot is interesting, but the story could use some polishing up. I agree with the other reviews that it could benefit from showing not telling. Overall, I really enjoyed it and look forward to seeing suggestions worked into future chapters!

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