Ian Norrington

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Clever concept

Characters with depth, and interesting events.

I would recommend some heavy editing work on this. Grammar in some places needs reworking. Certain phrases and adjectives are repeated too often. Past and present tense seem to get mixed around quite a lot, which throws off any suspension of disbelief, as does awkward dialogue.

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