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My name is Maddie. My favorite color is blue. I love to read

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Great!

So I just finished reading it and I really like it. (I'm a fast reader) great job!

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Add more please

I absolutely loved this. I loved the detail. Sometimes writers give very little detail and it makes it a boring read but you did amazing!

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I loved it

I really enjoyed this book. It was a good read!

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The Illness

I loved this so far

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Very good

I absolutely loved this so far. I would add this to my list but I have like a bazillion books I haven't read yet. But I'm looking forward to updates. One thing I noticed was some of the punctuation was off. But other than that I really enjoyed it!

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Just my views on your book!

Hi so I did change my review since I didn't even read the whole thing before hand but now that I did..my views changed.. it's a good start but maybe work on these things.
Normally for songs, the pre chorus and chorus repeat to make it catchy.. so I think it would be nice to work on that.
I realize not all poems rhyme but don't try to force them too just let it flow (I give this advice to anyone who makes poems)
Also I noticed that sometimes you used the same words in the lines of poems.. I notice sometimes it doesn't always sound.. to its full potential when this is the case.
The grammer is very constant and could be better (use commas, periods ect)
Also In some lines I feel like for poems it's necessary for you to move down to a new line after a sentence in the poem.. like I do..
These are just my views and constructive criticism to help you as a writer! If you don't understand some of the things I'm saying, let me know and I'll be happy to help!

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So Many details!

I loved it. Mainly because of all the details, it made it very enjoyable!

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No words

I have nothing to say other than I loved it. It's literally flawless for Grammer and everything for the most part. Great job!

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No words

I have nothing to say other than I loved it. It's literally flawless for Grammer and everything for the most part. Great job!

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Great

Some things could be expanded on but so far so good. I could only do the first two chapters due to school but I love it

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Loved it

It was very interesting in a good way I loved it!

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I liked it

I loved how you added so many details it makes it enjoyable to read!

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Great

I simply loved it!

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It was good just a bit of grammatical error

This was a fun read and normally I only read the first two chapters of books so this was perfect. I liked it but there was a lot of grammatical error. If you would like help there are inkitt groups that I believe help with editing. But overall it was good!

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I loved it

This was great but some grammatical error at some points but overall, I loved it keep it up!

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Here it goes

I liked it just didn't like that you put that she was abused ect in the beginning where you say about the book. I think you have to let the reader follow the journey to find out this all happened!

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A gift with a gift

I completely loved this!

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Good!

I really like this

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Railroads

This was a good read. I really enjoyed your wording for certain parts of the story! Overall this was great!

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Amazing

I really enjoyed this.

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Great!

This book was really interesting. I really enjoyed it. There were some grammatical errors but other than that I loved it!

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AMAZING!

I loved this so much. I know exactly how the author feels. It's so sad but so good and the Grammer was great! I would recommend this to anyone.

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Good

I really like this so far. I wish there was more added though

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It was ok

Always capitalize the I in a sentence. I liked it but, the Grammer could be better

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Erotic One Shots

Hi there, you asked me to review your book last night. So let's start off with I'm not 18, but I'm pretty mature for my age so it's not a big deal. I really enjoyed the plot and details you provided simple as that :)

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Enjoyable

I loved this simple as that. Some things confused me but other than that this is great

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The Swarm And the Flyer

Hi there I only got to the first four chapters. (I have school so it might take a while to finish) but I loved it. But I especially loved the details. Thanks for making this.

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The Bad Boy and the Angel

Hi I hope you don't mind that I didn't read the whole thing. Just because I have school and it would take a while to read it all. But I will take time and read the full thing one of these days. Anyways I loved the details and just everything, I would definitely recommend this.

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By Anyone

Hi I loved this so much. I loved how you said English wasn't your first language but yet there weren't many grammatical errors. And I also loved the poems they were great!

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Amazing

I didn't read the whole thing yet but I will. So far I read two chapters and I gotta say I really enjoyed it. But specifically I loved how there were so many details it made it very interesting. Anyways overall I loved it and I would recommend this to anyone.

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Enjoyable

This was enjoyable

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