I am not going to Lie
When I first saw this on one of the inkitt community pages, and due to the picture posted, I expected it to be super horror, I guess the author changed the genre, which I believe to be the right choice on the author's part.,
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The author's writing style is something I admire, however, truth be told, the drama genre has never been my cup of tea, but I could still tolerate reading it and that goes to show you how okay the story is.
I am not going to lie, if you do choose to read this then you will have to be patient in other to get to the most interesting parts of the story because, if I am going to be fair in this review while reading the first three chapters I wasn't that encouraged to keep on reading, and the reason was simply that there were no that much compelling or very engaging events going on that could arouse the curiosity in me to read on, however, the more you read, the more you get to find out about the main character and his struggles.
I can't really judge the author's grammar skills in all honesty as English isn't my first language, however, with the little I know of, I think the grammar wasn't bad., maybe I am wrong, but that's left for you to decide after reading the story.
I wish the author all the best with this story and I hope you keep up the good work.