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Super six

This is really a good story. You imagination is really good. Your imagination is good. You proved no one is flawless. I felt like monarchs are ancient version of avengers( Though count was six here). Plot flow was comfortable to follow. Unique names- You picked names in a unique way that is one of the thing I loved. I guess you chose from different languages. Loved your work. Waiting for sequel by Royals.

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Ray-Dark

The plot and the way you constructed a way to readers to walk over the story is really good. Ray and Dark, names you chose did fitted. There are some spelling mistakes (like using 'Than' instead of "Then"). Nonetheless I loved the way you narrated the story.

Ps: waiting to read rest of the story.

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Good work

Leah was a character which is the perfect/ formal definition for "Bad ass" . Really, she was strong, bold , didn't care about what others think about but parallelly values her mother and the way you elaborate

Mr .Philips- he has wit and beauty- was really nice. But there are some grammatical mistakes , don't worry that were minute just proofread it that will be enough.

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Stupid friends

Story is very funny and really quick. personally, if I am in Laura's shoes, trust me, my mind will be choosing better epitaph. Story is incredibly quick and straight to the point.

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Intriguing

you nailed character development even though it is a short story.
Story is intriguing I didn't stop myself to read until end.
The grief and emotions you injected are in perfect measurements.
you are really good at choosing specific words to portrait a situation
hoping you will add more chapters to the story(between len and wil)

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Little girl I have found you D:

You did your best to make readers feels goosebumps. I would like to tell you that you achieved in making this story piece intriguing. "Little girl I have found you" .A small elaboration of ghost other than wide grin and red eyes will make the story more intriguing.

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