Inshaal Numair

Nice story

This is a story with an interesting plot. I like the Indian twists you have given to it, and the romance is nice. It moves a little fast, but that is to be expected when a king meets his queen again. Overall, those things you excelled in.
However, there were numerous grammatical errors, many of which I have already pointed out to the author, and the sentence structure was not the best. However, those are just technical errors, and this will be a really good story once you've fixed those.

Amazing writing

The MC hooks the reader from the start, and doesn't seem to let go. It was a great story, with lots of detail to make imagining the events easier; you make the characters seem real and three-dimensional, and I ca really see King's frustration and desperation. Overall, great chapter.

Really gripping

This story is really great. I mean, the characters all have different sides to them, Gem is a gem, and we are left in suspense at the end which makes it really easy and fun to read this book.
There were several grammatical errors, as well as mistakes in punctuation, but they got lesser as the story progressed, and would only take a minute to fix, so it's not a big of a deal.
Overall, really loved this book thus far, and I can't wait for the next chapters.

Nice story

The characters in this story are gripping, complex, and you have a smooth way of displaying all the emotions they're feeling. The characters have layers, and definitely a history, which we get to know more about as the story goes on. The only thing is that you maybe put a little too much information in some paragraphs to properly digest; I like it when the information is just a little lesser, so it's easier to read and enjoy properly. Other than that, great story, good writing, I liked it.