Isabel Mager

Detroit, MI

I'm Isa. I'm working on my masters degree and learning Italian for funzies. Currently, I'm writing my own story. It's a dystopian tale. I hope you stick around to find out more about it.

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Delightful, Page turner

It had the appropriate amounts of twists and turns. Moments of joy and a few sad/tense moments too. The naughty scenes were pretty great too! 😈 The plot flowed nicely and the characters developed and grew at a great pace. Overall one of the better stories I’ve read on here. It did have a few typos, misspellings and misused words. While it was noticeable I don’t think it took away from the story.

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One of the best !

Probably one of my favorites I’ve ever read on here. It’s unique and well written. The characters are well developed. It’s also funny and relatable in an unexpected way. Definitely worth a read!

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Great idea; needs work

Skips from one idea to the next without development making it hard to follow. Essentially there are no transitions. The grammatical errors and typos are not uncommon on this platform but are very obvious in this story. I do think the author has a great concept here but it just needs some work.

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