julianne denise

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beautiful

read it over and over 🥰

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enjoyable

Very interesting and I really like how there are only few mistakes to notice. But overall, I did enjoy reading!

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nice

Nice plot. The character names reminded me of Underworld.

Just needs improvement on the construction of some sentences and the grammar. ☺️

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Broken Princess

It has an interesting plot!
Though there’s still room for improvement with the grammar and spelling.
But, overall, nice!

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