Jacinta

Her Rock

It was so tasteful and loving...
You wrote about two characters that weren't molded to fit but to stay true to themselves.
I oved your writing technique and the story line. You didn't draw anything out and make it boring,
it flowed wonderfully. Well Done!

Billionaire Masquerade

It was so tasteful. The waiting was just perfect, that was until they ....? It waqs so perfectly written that I couldn't guess when the moment was going to arrive. Truly a lovely, light, romantic story. Jacinta :)

Bleeding Hearts

It is very drawn out, but it works ... I am bleary eyed but determined to keep reading.
I love your character Nathaniel. He is the bad demonic type, with a conscience!
Thank you for adding this to the contest, I wish you well, you are a quality writer, J xx

Lie to Me

Your writing style is very succinct. It would be impossible to misinterpret therefore your story line was insanely addictive. No waffle, no fillers, just a concisely written, purely unadulterated brilliant piece of writing if I do say so...

Cherry

It's writing is fast paced, it had an unfinished intrigue about it.
Your style and story line is fantastic.
Definitely the type of storyline that hooks from the very beginning.
Congratulations

Unchained - Torture to Bliss

I love your story line. The characters are fantastic.
I can tell you are engrossed in your story and want to keep writing.
Some sentences finish abruptly or the scene does, which leaves me feeling a little uninformed.
Perhaps some more feelings or descriptions.
Anyway I am hooked and looking forward to some more story line because this is great,
the intensity is coming I know!
You have a great gift and I believe you have immense literary skill.
Ciao now now!

The Mafias daughter

Your last review was 8 months... Why are all the good stories incomplete?
Please add some chapters, its a good story line.
Genuinely good

Suits and Scars

Wowza! I am hooked, line and sinker. Gotta read this story, like, geez!

Vampiry

You have a great story IF you write in more detail. Don't shy away, trust your instincts and elaborate. If this is your beginning, keep going :)

Caged

Once this book is completed you will have astronomical readers. This book is intense, edgy, realistic. You captured me on the first page till the last.
Continue and let the readers see what impressive skills you have as a writer. Not finish, and you'll be dreadfully disappointed.
This is a brilliant story, congratulations Lovebug!

Bartered Slavery

Words are hard to master. A story is genuinely difficult to master as well. This story has both a Grand Master and is Masterfully executed. I hope you appreciate just how insanely excellent this book is and how incredibly talented the writer is as well ...

An encounter with an Alpha

This was fast paced as the author said, but it was also worth the read. It was such a smooth ride, great characters, lots of description and details, ending with .... uh! uh! Gotta read it yourself and enjoy it. Loved the Love
Thank you Kim you are a gifted writer

Kneel Submit Obey

Truly a book worth reading because: it had a fantastic plot, insane story line, brilliant characters, realistic drama and suspense. It was captivating. The conversations were so intense and in sync with what I would expect from .... I wont spoil it for you readers. Just start on chapter one and finish on 38. You will not be disappointed!
Oh! And Gia ....classy girl! A+ and a Gold Star :)

The Betas daughter

You have a wonderful way of writing. I loved the sensitivity, humour, story line. Definitely unique and kept me captivated all the way through Especially the ending, hoorah! to twins...

till the final round

You did it again. You seem to do it again and again and again . Kudos! Adelina Jaden. It is impossible to stop reading or not think about your book(s) when I do. They are sublime, a healthy way to overdose, Thank you ,,,.

Fight On

Oh.my.goodness,Adelina Jaden. You are the bomb! BOOM! When I start a story, it is till the end, no drinks, no sleep, nuh-thing. Hook, line and sinker I am a fish gasping for more not air. Thank you for the ride!
Jacinta

Stolen Dance

OMG :0 Adelina Jaden. You are a beast, and I am hanging around for the scraps. Thank you.

Riders of Tyr #8

A to Z Perfection, Brilliant, had me reading till my eyes hurt. Truly, you are a master words smith. Thank you Adelina Jaden.

Knock on Wood

Your words are brilliantly strung together. The story line was intense, sensitive, unexpected, sad, happy, descriptive, so wonderfully balanced. Thank you. Thank you for sharing your gift. This is one I shall remember forever because it was THAT good!

Bad Boy Xavier

Goodness me! Sizzle Sizzle
You have an absolute gift at hooking the reader on the first page
Bravo!!!

Teach me to Live

Just beautiful. Tasteful.
Thankyou

His Christmas Angel

It was sweet and so so adorable. The respect and decency were heartfelt.
The slow build up was addictive, the attention to detail was well written
thanks :)

The Son of Leviathan

You are quirky, crazy good. Addictive. Cheeky. Humorous. Luv the characters and their personalities.
When you feel inspired, keep writing because you have a gift
Thanks :)

The S Mafia

Sentima! I am bleary eyed, tired, I have read both stories, am dehydrated and hungry.
You have had me hooked on your stories like an addict. The complication is actually brilliant.
Your story line, time frames, plot, characters everything is A+.
You are a master of your craft. So thank you for sharing, thank you for writing, thank you Sentima!

Falling for the bad boys

It is intoxicatingly addictive. I am envious, in a good way.
You make bad boys sound so good :)

Self Hatred

Racheal Marie ...
I write positive reviews always, to encourage and for the honesty of the words I have read.
You ... you have moved my soul. I have not felt so emotionally connected since for ever!
This is so real, so sad, so forgiving, so pure, so devastating, so unconditionally loving it near broke me.
Thank you for the story that I shall remember (hopefully) all my days because it was a good one ...

The General

Elaine W. thanks for writing such an unusual and alternate style of literature.
Its innovative, clever, futuristic (literally) unique and never once lulled.
You have a gift with words, your timing is brilliant, imagination and creativity fantastic
Thank you

Vendetta

You are so wicked!
I swear the writing was so precise I believed I was there listening to their conversations.
You truly have a gift for the darker side of things in a masterful way,
Thank you

Ties

Well, I'm having a good laugh! Arrogant smut.... Love your words, I can just imagine him.

Now that I am finished, my review!
Your literary skills are top class. Your writing style is crazy good. The way you describe and express the scenes and characters, use of words (all different, nothing repeated) and then the little quirks that consolidate their individual characters - L. M. Wolfe you are a great author.

My Mother's Husband

Well that has really drawn me in. You have an addictive way of writing so that I find it hard to stop reading when my eyes are hurting. Love the main characters, plus there being a couple which is a nice change. Your suspense, drama, tension is really great. Can't wait for more chapters, I. am. hooked.
You have a great gift with words and imagination....
Thanks from Lee

The Step Brother

Well, that was written well. It also had me guessing which I like...
Not only did I find it hard to put down, I was both torn with wanting more and satisfied with what I got.
A great balanced storyline and good character description. Yep! You get my vote of approval :)

Sow me Sensei

This was a killer. A slow burn that had my toes curling...
You have a gift with words and know how to use them.
Thanks for a respectful, intimate and decent story

Between the Flames

Golly golly gosh!
This is intensely brilliant...
Your imagination is insane good.
Love this story - please initiate a movie

Beyond Darkness

It was one of the best. Brilliant!
I am shattered and inspired. In love and torn.
Your words were executed so well that it had me mesmerized from start to finish.
A good writer does that and you did it perfectly,
Thank you

Our Love is like pitching in the dark

Now this is a cutie pie story....
It was absolutely delicious girl!
You definitely have skills so please keep at it,
sincerely thanks

To Train a Wild Rose

Thank You.
Thank you for writing such brilliance and describing your story in such detail.
Intricacies that captured my thoughts and refined my perspective...
Your boundaries have permeated my existence and I am in awe of your gifts,
Thank You

Sanctuary

If I could give you more stars - I would!
If I could write more than words - I would!
If I could convey my actual feelings - I would!

That was simply sublime. Perfect. Nothing else - PERFECT!

Mafia Captve

Wholly Manolley
This is sooooo exciting.
I have been captivated and now hooked....
Thank you for your gift

My Twisted Lovers

Oh my God!
I can't breathe, I am so broken.....
Your words are killing me with how broken Brie is.
I am devastated because your words are brilliant.
I'm dying
:(
I've finished and I am beside myself. I don't think I have ever become so invested before...
You give it your all, I read and absorb your gift.
Thank you sincerely for making me feel more than depth, I was permeated!

Fix You

Wowza! You have a brilliant mix of sexual tension and drama.
This was exquisite and beautifully written.
Well done to you as an author and gifted writer of words.
Elijah and Sorsha were so lovingly portrayed it had my heart melting
Well done

Stay

Woo Hoo
This was fantabulous....!
It flowed wonderfully and didnt drag. You left a few loose ends for more stories which I love.
You didnt smut the love scenes, if anything they were tender and intense between two ppl.
You have a great gift, thanks for sharing another great story

My Future Stepbrother

Thank you
Thank you
Thank you
It was a page turner. It held me captive.. I cried. I laughed. I was in pain. I was in love.
You put your heart and soul into a glorious story.
I am a fan and I am grateful for you literacy.
Thank you

The Canary cowards

Oh My! This is keeping me on the edge of my seat, bed, stool, desk; where ever I am reading.
This has everything romance should have, misunderstandings, missed moments, close encounters, banter, realities, romance, humour, interferences etc....
Thank goodness you are sharing your gift because you are very talented.
Thank you

The Reverb Effect

What a story line... Ingenious, creative, unique, made me a blubbering mess.
Grey is sooooo yummy. Nav was fierce and tender. Sofia was perfectly described.
Your technique in relating, portraying, describing, relaying is exceptional. Keep writing you have a gift.
Thank you wholeheartedly

Bloody Screams Hellion MC #1

That was FANTASTIC
She was fierce yet not abnormally above scars, injury, pain, nightmares, loving.....
Great story - great characters.
Be proud Bella O'Brien

The Grey Billionaire

I was captivated. I was entranced. I was overwhelmed with your brilliant descriptions.
You are a first class writer and story teller. This could be a movie.... This could be a fairytale novel...
I will tag you and follow willingly. Please finish more books - quickly.
With sincerity
thank you

The bully I fell in love with

You write like you are excited and wanted to keep going, it was really cute.
It was easy to get the gist of your story line and understand who was who etc...
If you slowed the process a little then the descriptions and sentences would flow easier.
If I was to look at your story as a whole I'd give you 100% because the story was full of
enthusiasm & immense effort.
I recon it was a beauty,
Thank you

The Alphas prize

It was fabulous.... Your story line was daring and had an edge of unknown mystery about it.
Each conclusion I assumed was sorely wrong, only to have a more exciting outcome.
Keep writing, sharing, expressing and asking Q's ços you have a gift,
Thanks

Don't stay close to me

I can relate to your enthusiasm, writing with adrenalin and leaving the punctuation till last.
Trust your skill because you have immense talent.
The story line was fabulous!
Keep tapping away on the keyboard....

Forever too far, Command Me

Well! You certainly had the hunger factor happening.... Your writing skills are crazy good, I understood everyone's personalities explicitly.
Continue, this is something that is a natural gift.
Just enough ooh la la without being ... umm ... you know!
Thanks for sharing,