Jacob Ballew

Admirer of the canon and similar art. New chapters will be uploaded weekly, or twice a week.

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Wow

Such a great book! I loved every minute of it.

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Mindblown!

All I can say is...WOW! Just with the hook alone, the story was already great. Three chapters in and i WANT MORE!

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I like!

I'm a huge fan of fantasy, and recently i've been trying to get my fantasy fix on...and i shall look no further now that i've discovered your tale. Keep up the great work!

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Couldn't Stop!

At first I was like "oh i'm in a mood for a good sci-fi story let me check this out" but now i'm ANXIOUSLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I'm loving your style of writing, it's very clear and concise and it doesn't feel like a giant ramble. Also, a million praises for your atmospheric tension and descriptions. I could literally hear, feel, see, etc everything that you had written. Keep up the great work!

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Wow!

Amazing! Love it so far. Keep up the great work!

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Just by reading the first chapter I’m totally hooked! I feel like now we can look back at this time (even though it was only like 20 or so years ago) and see it as historical and to have such a great story in such a “historical” yet contemporary setting is amazing.

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Amazing Characterization

YES YES YES! I’m so in love with the story and it’s characters. They are actually people I can see them living and breathing in our world—that’s how relatable they are!

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More Please!

I'm already hooked with just the first chapter! I can't for the next. I'm getting some heavy Black Mirror vibes, which I love and i'm so excited to see where the story goes.

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Great Start so Far!

Really interesting story, so far and i'm sure things will only start picking up! Keep up the good work!

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