Jade.h.v

Beautiful

It was short and nice to read even if it was just a few minutes. I love to hear true stories like this, read about miracles like this! It made me smile :) xxo

Can't wait for more

The detail it great. There's no mistakes and the plot flows well, keeps your toes curled! Cannot wait for more. Love the work that's been presented already. Hope the next update is soon ❤❤

I FOUND

First thing I'm gonna comment on is the paragraphs. Maybe not so big and separate the speech from the paragraphs. If it's a different person talking, separate that from the same line too. Next is that detail is good and it's got me hooked already :) I'm interested in what's coming next. A few errors but I could still move around them and understand. This is great because I was looking for something new to read and now I've got something to follow up on. Can't wait for the next updates! :)

Eva & Him

Absolute amazing. Do uniquely developed that I couldn't stop reading. I wish there was more cause it passed so quickly. I recommend this to everyone in for a good and quick read but still have your heart cooled and warmed. Truly in love with it now and so happy I found it to read ❤❤ xxo

Amazing

Great detail and no mistakes with spelling. I really enjoyed it and the end just pulled me in the most and I was left wanting more ❤ I hope maybe you will write another story. If so, I'd love to read it and no doubt it'll be as entertaining as this one.

Amazing

I was in love with it all the way!!! Really thought out and impressive. On top of the charts for me ❤❤

HMITVOAL

So good and funny. Im in love woth all the realtionships. The twins and Rin. Need to know more though 😂❤ It's well written and keeps me interested. Please update soon!!!

Toes curling

Kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way through!! With every chapter ending, I just wanted to know what happened next! It was well written as a story and plot but the grammar and where the full-stops and all that were got annoying now and then.
Other than that! I loved it!

So good!

Lovely work. A few mistakes here and there but it was quite interesting!

True Love

Absolutely adored it the whole time! Truly amazing and happy but with those twists. Great work, is one to read again

Fabulous!!

Incredibly funny and entertaining. Loving it all the way and its something is read over and over because it makes me laugh🤣! It's so well done, I do get confused on who's talking when it changes from Vincent to Parker but I get the hang of it. You've completed an amazing piece of work! Well done 😉