Jade.h.v

Hobart, Tasmania, Australia

Life's your own story. I'm into The Chainsmokers and country music as well as hot hits :) I love Jeeps! And in love with reading and writing. Join me for the long ride and enjoy what I've got!! :) xxo

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Can't wait for more

The detail it great. There's no mistakes and the plot flows well, keeps your toes curled! Cannot wait for more. Love the work that's been presented already. Hope the next update is soon ❤❤

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Beautiful

It was short and nice to read even if it was just a few minutes. I love to hear true stories like this, read about miracles like this! It made me smile :) xxo

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I FOUND

First thing I'm gonna comment on is the paragraphs. Maybe not so big and separate the speech from the paragraphs. If it's a different person talking, separate that from the same line too. Next is that detail is good and it's got me hooked already :) I'm interested in what's coming next. A few errors but I could still move around them and understand. This is great because I was looking for something new to read and now I've got something to follow up on. Can't wait for the next updates! :)

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AMAZING

I am a really slow reader so your story worked because it was full of detail and I could remember what was happening a few days apart. Great grammar and amazing style. I want to shout out a big thanks for even coming in contact with me. It was something I really enjoyed and it was different from what I've written and read before which spiced things up for me!
I can't wait for the sequel too :)
xxo

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Amazing

Great detail and no mistakes with spelling. I really enjoyed it and the end just pulled me in the most and I was left wanting more ❤ I hope maybe you will write another story. If so, I'd love to read it and no doubt it'll be as entertaining as this one.

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Amazing

I was in love with it all the way!!! Really thought out and impressive. On top of the charts for me ❤❤

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HMITVOAL

So good and funny. Im in love woth all the realtionships. The twins and Rin. Need to know more though 😂❤ It's well written and keeps me interested. Please update soon!!!

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Toes curling

Kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way through!! With every chapter ending, I just wanted to know what happened next! It was well written as a story and plot but the grammar and where the full-stops and all that were got annoying now and then.
Other than that! I loved it!

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So good!

Lovely work. A few mistakes here and there but it was quite interesting!

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Update soon!! Please ❤

I'm loving this so far and I hope you update soon!! 🥰
It's so good and I'm for sure gonna check out some for your other work while I wait for the next update. GOOD JOB 👍

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True Love

Absolutely adored it the whole time! Truly amazing and happy but with those twists. Great work, is one to read again

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Fabulous!!

Incredibly funny and entertaining. Loving it all the way and its something is read over and over because it makes me laugh🤣! It's so well done, I do get confused on who's talking when it changes from Vincent to Parker but I get the hang of it. You've completed an amazing piece of work! Well done 😉

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Youth

Love this story too much!!
It's really good and can t wait to start on the sequel.

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