Jena
This book is a great book, I like this one better than the last but they both have great ideas. I kinda like longer books but this is good, Kinda predictable. but nevertheless its a great book. I do have a few pointers though
-when you are writing a books, its important to keep the conversation out of a informational paragraph unless your doing something like this, heres and example
"my favorite color is pink" she said "what's yours??"
if that makes sense
- try to add more details, like what does the character look like, what do the other chracters look like, what does the surroundings look like
-its a bit fast paced, its ok to go slow but not to too slow enough to bore readers
Its a great book, keep working on writing, inkitt does have a blog and something called "inkitt writers bootcamp" or something like that, check them out, its really informational, if i don't know how to do something correctly, I look and see if it is addressed.
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