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"You haven't known pain...until you see the ones you love, feel pain. That is when...you will truly...understand pain" ~Taken~ |She/her/hers|Bisexual|I am a♉|Bestfriends-Raiden~Sanu~Felix~Demon~

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The Alphas second chance mate

The book is amazing, the first time I read this book before it was taken down and reposted I fell in love with it, now I love it even more. I just love this series. I love the characters personality, and their development, the good, the bad, I just love it all. There is nothing I would change in this book or series, its perfect the way it is. How do you write so good, its amazing, I have been writing for forever and I am not this good. I need help???😂❤, I'm just joking....maybe...

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Twin's Luna Crescent


This book is amazing I can't wait to read the last mates even if it isn't continuing this book.

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Mated to a werewolf


This book is amazing. I was hooked by just ready the first paragraph of this book. Just absolutely amazing. I couldn't even write this good and I can write good. I have to suggest this app and this book to a few of my readers on a different app because I write on that app. Great job author.

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The Alphas Son

Ok...

I'm just gonna say one thing

THIS BOOK IS SO FREAKING AMAZING

JUST KIDDING

I HAVE MORE TO SAY

I am in love with all the characters. The way the author of this book writes their personalities and just everything about them is so well written. I wish I could write characters as well as you can

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Golden Wolf


THIS IS AN AMAZING BOOKS, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS.

I never properly thanked you for reading Alphas Lost Luna, I took your feedback to heart, I really look up to you, and it makes me happy that you read it😊

But anyway, I love this book so flipping much, great job

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Jena

This book is a great book, I like this one better than the last but they both have great ideas. I kinda like longer books but this is good, Kinda predictable. but nevertheless its a great book. I do have a few pointers though

-when you are writing a books, its important to keep the conversation out of a informational paragraph unless your doing something like this, heres and example
"my favorite color is pink" she said "what's yours??"
if that makes sense

- try to add more details, like what does the character look like, what do the other chracters look like, what does the surroundings look like

-its a bit fast paced, its ok to go slow but not to too slow enough to bore readers

Its a great book, keep working on writing, inkitt does have a blog and something called "inkitt writers bootcamp" or something like that, check them out, its really informational, if i don't know how to do something correctly, I look and see if it is addressed.

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The Survivors


Enna,

This book is so flipping good. I love it, it's a bit fast paced, but man does it fit, not very many authors can write fast paced books and keep readers interested, especially me. I like long slow reads because its makes me wonder more, so many questions and theories go through my head, but this book did the exact same as longer reads. The 8th chapter is my favorite so far, and YOU MA'AM ARE ONE OF THOSE WRITERS!!, I cant even do that.

This book has me laughing, crying, screaming and yelling with anger, so much emotions going through my head. I absolutely adore this book. Thank you💚💚💚

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Alpha Loren


SUCH AN AMAZING BOOK, I loved it, I love the character development, especially with leo, I saw the change a little fast but not too fast, you spread out the changes of the characters evenly across the book chapters. YOU ARE OVERALL AN AMAZING BOOK WRITER, YOU HAVE THE POTENTIAL OF BECOMING A WRITER!!!😇😄

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Craving

This book is absolutely amazing, I can't wait for more chapters. I suggest explaining more of the surroundings in depth a little more but other than that the book is amazing and and so so so so so so goooood!!!!. Thanks for making such an awesome book, @hae191

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Golden Prophecy


This book is absolutely amazing, just like the ones before it, can this book get any better!!. This book is perfect, each chapter makes me love the book even more!!!. Keep going author!!!!😁😊😆

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A MATE FOR ME


Great book, I just wish the chapters were posted more frequently. But great book, and I just fell in love with the book by the first chapter

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Broken Omega


I really enjoyed the first two and I know I will enjoy this one, I already am. I'm thinking about maybe buying it the first two and then buying this one. This is an amazing book. I was thinking about becoming a professional writer when I get older and as I keep reading more and more great books it just adds to my decision of becoming a writer, I write on Wattpad, my books are My Alpha which I am working on and The Alphas Omega Beta which I am also working on, but enough about me. This author is amazing, she has a great imagination and awesome twists and turns I would love ❤️ to learn a few tricks from her but I would never ask because it's not my place but nonetheless the book is amazing.

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Alpha


This book is amazing I just wish it had more chapters

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The one and only Alpha


This book is amazing but I got to take stars because of the punctuation errors I even suck at punctuation and I can even notice the errors. But even with all the errors but I love this book.

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I Am Alpha


I love this book it is so amazing and author you should make a series of these

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Broken luna

I love this book it's the best book I have read and my thanks goes out to the author for his or hers amazing writing skills I think is see a future writer while reading this book and this book has inspired me to continue writing on an app called wattpad.

If you want to read my stories on wattpad the stories are My Alpha and The Alphas Omega Beta.

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