Jadlynn Hagler

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💎Jade💎 Ninth Grade October 8, 2004 Awkward 15 year old who loves to write Wattpad: Jadejewel1994 Snapchat: Jade_ jewel94

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Movie Night With a Catch

The plot is good. I really think that you jumped into it a bit quickly, so maybe just slow it down a bit or stretch it out? It also has some very veryyy minor spelling and grammar errors but that's easily fixable and I believe we all do that from time to time. It wasn't that realistic, but of course, it's fiction. I don't think the girls would jump up and go with him, especially since they were already getting creepy vibes from him, but overall, the plot and story is good and intriguing.

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I never put it down

This book was amazing. It always had me waiting for whatever happened next. It was the perfect romance, complete with drama, and even a little action. It took me on a journey and made feel all warm and bubbly. Thank you for this amazing story and you'll definitely get far in life.

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Already captured!

Even though the story isn't that far along yet, I'm already captured in the writing of this novel! It already has great character and I like the way you use descriptions for the details and create even more vivid imagery for your readers. Keep up the great work and I'll be waiting for the new chapters!!!

-Jade

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Collection of short stories

This story reminded me of reading a short story in English class. It has a good plot, a theme, and it was relateable to some women and realistic. It was very good and I will be waiting for more of this authors work. Thanks for the story!!!

~Jade

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Becoming His

This is the best cliche ever! I loved it and couldn't put it down because I was always waiting to see what would happen next. I love your potential and can't wait for more of your work!!!

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DEFINITELY ONE OF MY NEW FAVORITES!!!

I absolutely loved this story and I will definitely be reading more of your work! It was really interesting and I binge read it in a day. I would reccomend tgis book to pretty much ANYONE! I also feel like you should actually get this published because I know I would definitely buy this book!

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I was so engrossed!

I could not put this book down! I was captivated and I loved it. This just may be my favorite story ever!!!

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I need more!

I loved the book and the plot line, and now I'm craving for more. I love love loved it and a huge thumbs up to @Simone-Elise

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